All Comments on 'Louisa and Lucia'

by magnesiumkuk2

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mBrowmBrowover 12 years ago
Nice Story, feels incomplete

The story seems well-written grammatically, and it developed well through the session with Louisa. But there seems to be some story yet to ...

magnesiumkuk2magnesiumkuk2over 12 years agoAuthor
More to come

Thank you, there is more story coming in a week or so.

texhudtexhudalmost 12 years ago
Ready for more

Good story, moves quickly, good descriptions

texhudtexhudover 11 years ago
More

Good start, now continue . . . . .

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