All Comments on 'Lovers Without Realizing It'

arousing and sexy and beautiful, without being too much. very well written.

Beautiful

I am totally blown away that those events are real. The events contained in this story are totally awesome! I also wish the happy couple the best of luck with this relationship. Wow I love the witty ending.

I loved the story, just enough sex without being too totally explicit.

You sent me wild... Dont ever stop. Such beautiful writing.

i did not want this to end i wanted more and more.... please write a part 2 i beg you!! amazing writing just perfect !

AMAZING! Truly the best BEST story I've ever read on here!! Very well written. Thank you and PLEASE write a part two and other stories!!!

I may not be an important person or a expert in literature, but I have to say I have a passion for words and what you've done with them in this story is absolutely amazing. This is the best story I've read here, You certainly deserve your place as number one. I sincerely hope you decide to make a new entry. I would even go as far as paying for one of your stories. I'm lucky you've graced this story upon us for free. Overall, thank you and you are a very talented writer.

~Lillian

Hats off to you! Absolutly fantastic. Part two? :)

You must write more. This is superbly written.

I love these characters. This is truly a love story.

ThAnk you.

The way it ended left me in tears...beautiful.

Your writing was powerful and sensual. A very stimulating story indeed. Loved reading your story and hope there are more to be read!

A very compelling story, no wonder thy are still together

Very sweet

This is amazingly close to what happened with my girl and I. Only we were in middle school and we are now in high school discussing getting a apartment together. her name is Jessica too but I call her Jessi during intense moments too. This is exactly what happened with us. except only her parents agreed with it in middle school and my parents kept us apart but in the beginning of high school we ran away together and proved our love. But yea we started off sexually and i was straight but now I love her with all my heart and love this romance story<3

I can't count how many times I've read this story (or, indeed, how many times it's, uh, satisfied me). It's brilliant, beautifully written with great characterisation, set-up, build-up, the lot. Big kudos on your very much deserved No. 1 spot. And, like countless others, I'd love to read more of your work. I click on RedEmerald a lot, hoping to see more submissions, though when there's nothing new it just gives me the opportunity to re-read, savour and appreciate this work. Would love to see more stories from you and would REALLY love to see a companion piece to this one from Diane's perspective. (Oh, and echoing others, very much appreciative of the proof-reading, grammar and spell-checking that goes into your work :))

all i can say,or type, is Holy crap that was good. I can't beleive it is real and I really like that there was a beginning and not just all sex.

I read some stories in here but this made me completely utterly.... mesmerized!! I was allmost into tears at the ending.

Breathtaking

So many lesbian stories are actually male fantasies about what they think happens. This is undenyably the ral thing. Sensual, erotic and emotionally touching - one of the best stories on the site - or anywher for that matter.

This is my second time reading it and I still teared up at the end >.<

Great story!

I only wish I knew a little bit of what was going on in Diane's mind

This was incredibly well written (and incredibly hot). This story lasted me a good (and fun) three days (I found myself very satisfied many times). Not only is it a fun and sexy story, it is also a beautiful one. I found myself in tears at the end.

wish id a g/f like that!!

all that talk of pussy loving has me hot wet n wild ;-)

Finally this is highest rated.

WOW! so darn hot.

I thought this story was compelling and erotic. Lovely.

Wow... just... wow. That was incredible, in all aspects. A real 5/5.

That was hot!

Would love to hear more about these two.

Definitely a 5/5

I feel this was written with a lot of feeling for the people involved, and I was waiting for them open up to each other and say how much they love each other. I am a believer that we find true love when we least expect and with the person we least expect. lots of love to you both

Your capture of love,confusion,fear,and downright lust was envigorating. I couldn't stop reading at all! I felt like I was there. Truly incredible.

That was amazing! I couldn't stop reading either. I want more...

This was beyond amazing

i had an orgasm toward the end without even touching myself! 10/5

This story is exquisitely captured with great warmth, passion and humanity. It artfully delves into the emotions of the protagonists leaving the reader hanging on every word. This is erotica at it's finest. Truly mesmerizing.

that was the BEST I've ever read. No doubt.

This was sooo well written!!! It was one of the BEST stories i've read!!! LOVED IT!!

Oh wow. That gave me chills all over. Great job.

100% entertainment. Romance, suspense, you name it and it was there. I got so into the story that I was laughing out loud and yelling "Don't do it! You'll get fired!" at my computer screen every so often. Absolutely loved it. Please write more. Haven't read anything so good in a long time.

Best I have ever read!!!! Well worth every bit of the time I should have spent studying! Keep writing ;)

That was amazing. im no expert on these stories but WOW best i've ever read. I didnt want it to end! amaazing. i was wet the whole way through ;)

that was sooooooooo amazing and the best one of these i have ever read just wow pure wow :D:D:D:D:D

You succeeded - entertaining, romantic, and definitely sexy. As someone said already, I didn't want it to end. Well written, well done. This is how erotica should be written.

By far the best story I have read on here!!!!!!!! It had me on edge definanly didn't want I to end please continue!!!?!

that was byy far the most amazingstory. And it makes it so much better thatits true. Saving the kiss for last made it so sensual and complex and and amazing! I'm a lesbian and this is the ultimate love story. I didn't feel like I was just reading smut it was wonderfully complex and thought provoking.

I really wanted to find out what happened to the couple after the story ended. For me at least, leaving a short note that says "In case the reader is curious, these two are still together, almost ten years after the events depicted here." doesn't cut it. I know they are together, but I'm still curious to see how things played out after they became a couple. Did Jessie stay on as her assistant since they no longer had to worry about losing each other? Did their pre-meeting rituals change at all? I don't necessarily want you to write up another sex scene, but it would be nice to have a short epilogue so the reader can see where the two ended up after the events in the story.

I've read some good stories, and some hot ones, and this manages to be both a lovely story about two gorgeous characters, and one of the steamiest reads out there. Bloody brilliant. Keep writing, please god, keep writing.

I agree with the person who said "this is how erotica should be written" - very very well written - amazing! loved this story

I agree with the comment that said this is what true erotica should be like! It was very hot and steamy, but in a loving, caring way that was not at all smutty. I'm a guy and my wife and I are best friends, but I don't think I'll ever know the kind of sexual intimacy you describe in this story. Don't get me wrong, we've had some incredible sessions over the years, but to know what it feels like on the other side, and be able to anticipate and respond to your partner in the way described in this story seems to me to be the ultimate act of loving and giving!

Just WOW

I am always looking for a story that reminds me of my own - that talks of LOVE and what happens in the real world when two women love each other - I am happy that you break the stereotype of lusty lesbians to reveal that love is beautiful and sex between two women is a bonding experience that is very erotic but even more so for committed couples!!!

I absolutely love a happy ending and the way you brought these two to life with all their hopes and insecurities was immense. Without a doubt the best story I have read on this site.

This was a really great story. Loved it all the way through.

This was such a great story, both romantic and intellectual at the same time. Best story I have ever read, thank you to the author and to Jessie for her patience in waiting it out!

Truly AWESOME! The best story I've read on this site!

It felt like I was reading a romance novel! Loved it!!!

One of the best stories I've read in a long time.

This is an amazing story. I loved it so much-- very well written and entertaining the whole way through. I never once got bored. I will certainly keep on coming back to this one for the weeks and years to come.

It was a romance, not just about sex. Please write more!

This absolutely took every emotion I've ever secretly had and put it in to beautiful, enticing words. Not only am I thrilled that they stayed together- that there is hope for such wonderful dreams to come true, but I am so appreciative of the incredibly written storyline and the style you used. Please please PLEASE write more! I don't even care what about. I would love to read anything you write (whether erotic or not), and can't wait to see the next one. Congratulations on a VERY successful first time!

Disclaimer:

Don't start reading this if you have something to do (e.g. work, class, honey-do's, etc), because you will become so engrossed that the world will turn off around you and you will be left in a blissful state of existence with these two characters. :)

One of the best i have ever read

I have never ever read something so incredibly intense and beautiful, you should be very proud of yourself.

I cant believe that when someone asks me who my favorite author is i'm going to have to reply "RedEmerald on a website called literotica.com". Just read all your stories right now and you are amazing. Wish you wrote general fiction too.

The best story by far i've ever read, this is what everyone dreams of happening in thier lifetime. WONDERFUL, Keep the stories coming. It made me want to be that girl. Got to read it again & again.

This story was fantastic even more so because it was a true story, a fantastic piece of writting that i didnt want to end! Just brilliant!

I have read this several times now and parts of it just keep echoing in my mind. I know for sure I will come back to re-read this again in the probably not so far future. It's really hot and still so very sweet at the same time. Love it.

Also: I will never be able to watch "Damages" again.

You should expand on it and make Diane not only your boss but your Domme. Fantastic.

When Jessica happens upon Diane's panties and is aroused by her scent, at that point I realized I was getting wet. When we did laundry as I was growing up, I discovered that my two older sisters did not smell alike, and nether did my mother compared to me. Thanks to the author for writing a part affirming the sense of smell.

Breathtaking work, extremely well written, and a great basic story as well. Would love a follow up story on this couple. Thank you again.

This was so well written and got me off so fast... Really sexy and hot. Thank you so much for this! Will definitely be coming back.

good god this is an absolute work of art, not only was this incredibly hot but it was easily the best short story I have read in my life. If you are not currently a writer, then change professions immediately.

my best wish's to the happy couple

Thanks for the great job you did!!!

Can you write something from Diane's point of view??

Reading for a second time.

Love this story so much.

And I agree with the previous comment!

What about Dianne's point of view?

That would be really interesting to read.

wow, where is the sequel

wow what a story. some amusing parts too.

Great read. This one's earned its place.

A story I wanted to actually read and finish because of the story, as well as the sex. You could be a real author.

I've read this a few times over months, years perhaps. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site. Great story!!!

This story is the best story I've read on Lit. I had read it a while back and re-read it today and I and I realized what a terrific job this author has done with this story.

What a wonderful and well written story. It just so happens that we are an attorney and his former secretary. Kay is very bi and Steve loves to hear of her adventures with women. This story is one of the most erotic we have ever read here. Your writing is superb.

What a beautiful, sexy & erotic love story!

I'M TOTALLY SPEECHLESS FILLED WITH ALL THESE INTENSE EROTIC DESIRES OF LUST AND LOVE.... I COULDN'T HELP BUT TO FALL IN LOVE WITH BOTH WOMEN...

i actually started crying because of how arousing this is.

This was a great story I read it twice and then I read your other stuff. Your writing is wonderful I really wish you would write another. I legit cummed my pants without touching myself.

I can't remember a time when I came so much just from reading an erotic story. My bed sheets were soaked and I am still thinking about wanting to be in this story. Delicious writing! Love it!

Horny Housewife from Milan, Michigan

This actually happens in real life? Damn, I have some hope after all! Amazing writing. Glad they found each other! :]

this story is great one of love and everything else and thats good that they r still together and im glad they are they deserve each other

awwwwww.... loved the ending. And such hot details.. raaaaaaaaaaaaar!

A beautiful story superbly written, thank you for sharing this.

That was a fantastic story. Very well writtne. It kept me avidly reading wanting it to go on for ever

Totally love this story, it gives me hope. Well written, couldn't stop reading.

I have read it so many times, so sweet :D

I have read this story several times and to know that it's a true story just blows my mind. Thanks for sharing this.

Elle_S

XD This story had me laughing so much, and I just want you to tell the characters in this-- they're very warm, realistic, and a very cute couple. ^^ One of the best real stories that have been altered that I've ever read, and not just because of the physical intimacies. It's because it's so obvious they were meant for each other!! =3 Thank you so much for sharing.

A wonderful Story,definitely an entertaining, romantic, and above all sexy story for us to enjoy. And Enjoy I did.

Could we have a sequel- where the story unfolds the continuing relationship and the erotic things That they did/do.

Ranji from Sri Lanka

not disappointed in the story,only the fact that it ended,could have read another 5 pages,any chance of a sequel?

Would it be possible to maybe get the same story from Diane's perspective? <evil grin> Loved the story and would love to know some of the thoughts that went on during parts of this great story

Such love and intimacy at such deep levels. Superbly expressed to the reader. If only every person could experience such a loving relationship in their lives... Bravo, well done!

amazing

Wonderfully told story. Any chance of sequal from Diane's perspective?