by RedEmerald
Very good story, great build up of sexual tension and emotion. Well done
I love this. Amazingly erotic and romantic. Please come back nd write morw.
Fantastic. The long build-up to their final love making was so exciting. You had me worried there near the end when the office expansion arose. I am so glad it ended as it did. Imagine all that sexy interaction between them before they finally kissed! It was so easy to imagine Jess making love to Diane; I could almost feel their bodies merging. Women are so damned good at making love to each other. Thank you for writing such an erotic story. I can understand why there are so many comments as so many have gotten enjoyment from your effort.
I first read this story many years ago, when i first started reading erotica. It captivated me then, and it still captivates me to this day. This is, without doubt, the best story on this site.
I'm sorry to say it, but there's a story called "Inertia Intersected" by the ironically-named Legitimately_Lauren, whose chapter 2 sex scene plagiarizes heavily from this story, often word for word. I reported it on that page.
I loved this story, my first read, but it won't be my last I will come back to it time and again.5*
Wonderful, simply wonderful. My sweet Helen suggested it to me, and she was oh so right. I hope the author returns with more. It is so sad talented writers appear then vanish. Please come back.
I’ve read this story many times. Gorgeously romantic and powerfully erotic. I find it captivating and keep coming back for more.
This ia extraordinary piece of writing. One of my very best favourites. Red Emerald, more please. The next chapter….
That has to be one of the most beautifully narrated stories I have read. Romantic and erotic, you delved into Jessie's insecurities as perfectly as you described her oral abilities and her fantasies.
Granted this was Jessie's story, but I missed not knowing Diane's thoughts as she was first seduced into being helped, and then into what turned out to be an addiction.
I see you have not written for many years, so we shall have to make do with the three stories you have left behind.
Kudos to your editor if you used one. Bad spelling or grammar jars me but your story flowed perfectly from beginning to end
Thank you.
Amazing story must have made me cum 4 times... I would love to hear the other lady's side of the story too am sure it would be just as erotic Bravo
This is the most wonderful stories of falling in lust and then in love I've ever read. I loved living Jess' life and love as she told her tale.
I'm so happy they remain lovers, in love. I hope they always are.
Thank you for this truly beautiful story!!
I still think of this as one of the best love stories I've read in a long time.
With 726 comments on the story at the time I'm writing this, I'm sure there's nothing for me to add. But I'd still like to thank you for this lovely, lovely, lovely story <3 <3
Indeed, a most excellent story with unbridled love developing and gradually unfolding for Jess and her lover!
Such a thrill to read……always hoping. for a breakthrough for Jess…and it did….
Such a romantic conclusion….whats next?
I need more of this story……
Great story . Needed to se lawyer totally surrender and submit and do her addistant
Noticing that the previous comment was pretty recent, I assumed this beautifully
written work was new as well, and wondered how I could possibly have missed it. What an awful shock to realize you posted just three stories fifteen years ago!
I hope you still read these comments and know that you are admired and appreciated. I'm on the back side of 75, and have come to understand what it means to leave one's inspiration for posterity in the hope it will be found adequate years down the road. Your work is timeless.
I enjoyed it very much; it was as planned very entertaining and sexy.
I have one negative, and that is about Diane, She was so self centered and selfish, she must have balls, I am sure she is a guy.
please keep writing!!
This was great, thank you! You kept things going throughout the entire story. Just, wow!
Thank you again.
The complexity of the story and characters are skillfully kept intertwined. The ending is not rushed in the least, and does not even seem like an ending, but more of a promise of things to come.
I am rereading this story often.
10 out 10 for enjoyment, of porn that has ...heart.
Fantastic
Such an erotic story.
So easy to know you are a sensuous female. THANKS
Awesome!!!! I just loved this one. You do a great job in character and scene development. And now you are gone! Please return to us with more of your amazing talent!!!!! Thanks
A classic. I have read this for years and keep coming back to it again and again. Thank you.
Since I started reading on this site a couple years ago, this is the only story that revved me up so much I simply had to do something about it (ifykyk). Such beautiful emotions, amazing writing. Thank you for this!!!
I think is my 4th read, absolutely love this story and how their relationship develops. So hot!
What a beautiful story. Told with patience which allowed it to breathe. It offered gentleness and a sweet love that few who write can manage. I found it so romantic and loving and very sweet. I fell in love with both characters. Adorable
Most stories I will read and move on. This is one of the stories that I keep returning to to read once more, and once more, and .... Thanks so much for sharing this story with your readers.