All Comments on 'Lovers Without Realizing It'

Great job at re-telling their story, one of the best lesbian sex stories I've read. Good replacement for my weekly porn ;)

That was hottest, sexiest story i've read on Lit. Mmmmmmm.

This was very good! Seems though you have stopped writing, please continue!

I have read and reread this story many times. You develop the plot so well and build the sensual tension to a wonderful climax. Pun intended!, your descriptions of love making gives me tingles! Please write some more stories for us to devour!

Incredible! Well developed story with an excellent story line and great characters. Perhaps you should write the "next great novel".

This lame story could have been told in two pages. Still together ten years later? Who CARES!

Beautifully crafted, characters wonderfully realized. Anonymous haters' sputum is always lobbed into the wind, turning back to foul their faces, not the writers' efforts, skills or craft.

One of the best stories I have read in quite some time. Good flow Great Character and believable. This story was also a nail-biter because when Jessica read the email I was just waiting for the relationship to fall apart thankfully it did not but you kept me on the edge of my seat literally till the end

I think I've read this story like 15 times and I'm not exaggerating. One of my top favorites for sure !

Yassssssss

I swear I had looked for this story so many times but I couldn't find it I think I have read this story many times it's really good

Loved this. Very well written and the story itself is just magical

So cute.

I found that sexy (probably because of a parallel to my life only I don;t have to guts to do anything better than dream)

hot, sexy erotic. great story 5stars

this story is beyond hot. an absolute favorite of mine. it never gets old.

The pacing, the imagery.....wow what a great read. This isnt the type of story that I get into, but its awesome.

You should write a part two in Diane's point of view

Pretty much the same thing happens in Marvel's "Jessica Jones"

I'm on my second read of this wonderful story. My enjoyment is enhanced knowing that it is based on a true story and that the couple is/was still together 10 years out. I like to see you write a Part 2. Part 2 being in Diane's voice, what she's experiencing thinking and feeling during the evolving of this relationship with Jessica (Jessie). You accomplished telling a very sexy engaging romantic story! Thank you and your friends for sharing their love story.

Pretty sure I read this in fanfiction.net with Grey's anatomy's callie and arizona on it.

This story is addictive. I ve been re-reading since 2013. I may forget, but I Do remember it Again! Professional writer you are, Redemerald if you don't know it already.

There is no way this story couldn't have been, 'reality-inspired', notice how they had never kissed till the end, notice how much in denial Diane was until her emotions got in the way and it started by offering her lover a better job and a holiday - haha. Notice how lesbian Jessie is, she knew she'd hold Diane ransom with lesbian sex and she, Diane wouldn't be able to go back anymore, (once you go, there's no going back!). Notice how in control Jessie was of not just the sex, but of the emotion and pace of the relationship, - butch. Then there was sacrifice, which always begets love.

I'm that kind of lesbian that prefers tribbing to cunnilingus so when I want to wow my lady again, I come read "lovers-without-realizing-it". It's my handbook to great lesbian oral sex. - C

I'm a 55 y/o Male, Ex-Marine and I completely adore this story; so much that I recommend it to everyone when telling them about "GREAT STORIES"

the build-up is so slow and seductive

Ben Bitten

So your friend just walked in on her boss masturbating and went to town on her?

I'm a heterosexual male and I really loved reading how she teased and lovingly brought her lover to a climax repeatedly without time limits- True Lovemaking and not just sex. Even though this is a sex story site, I enjoyed your narative as a non-sexual story because of your inclusion of non-sexual plot items of office life and office politics. Great story!

And this is why women will always be superior to men in bed. No mess to clean up haha. Strange to think this actually happened, but glad it worked out.

It was boring and lesbians are better lovers to lesbianz .Not straight woman

Well written, an instant favorite.

Better and hotter than almost everything else I've read here.

I agree with animal99. Completely.

I totally love this story. I've read it several times and find it so damn sexy as all hell.

You can hear ever sigh every moan and feel the orgasms building love your style thank you

I don't even know how many times I've read this story. But it is so great I love the style and how you can feel what they feel as you wrote this story. So thank you for making this great !!!

Lesbian love is not my first love, but your mastery of this complex relationship reeled my right in....thanks!

Would you please give us an update? Did they marry? Did the secretary go to law school? You wrote this in 2009; now it's 2017 we all crave to know. Are they still together?

You're red headed and green eyed--hence your Red Emerald name? You're a fantastic writer. Your style communicates everything. So clearly. Every skin quivering moment. Each time we read it. My vagina; his penis. Stiff, erect, we're both soaking wet. Consciously aroused.

As I sit, reading it aloud, he's masturbating me...then on his knees eating me...slowly...his tongue circling... stroking...finally reaching upward to my asshole.

Our lovemaking? More like ravenous fucking.

What we really appreciate in this story? That it's true. Everlasting love and lust.

How you describe its beginning, its growth, its completion. As if we're the eyes within the walls. Watching. We almost hear Diane's masturbating and smell her hot pussy as she climaxes. So desperately we desire to kiss Jessie's lips after she eats Diane... To smell, to lick Jessie's neck... To experience Jessie's pent-up arousal... What's hotter? To be her, as she wants to fuck Diane? Or to be Diane? Waiting. That ache. Wanting to be eaten yet again. Or, to have all control taken away. To be loved by Jessie. Wondering, secretly wanting to be fucked by Jessie.

The stress built within us. Peaking in London as the towel was peeled away.

And Diane. Was her formerly trimmed blond muff shaved clean and bare?

Then, as Jessie fastened her harness, I bent over our computer chair. My fantasy quickly became my reality. I closed my eyes as my husband grabbed my shoulders. My fantasy quickly becoming reality. Near the back of my head, I felt his right hand grasp a handful of my hair. He quickly positioned my already spread legs with his left.

I leaned onto my elbows while arching my back. His hands grasped, then kneaded my shoulders. His fingers lightly trailed down my back, finding traction on each hip.

Like a pro, he positioned his solid legs behind and between my own. I felt his knees, the outside of his thighs brush against mine. His muscles flexed. I heard him moan. Involuntarily, in response I uttered a short, high-pitched cry.

His hips flexed. Instantly I felt his penis slide into the crevice between my inner labia. Almost imperceptibly I felt him rock back and forth. Now positioning himself closer. Lifting my head, I blinked my eyes and moaned. I felt his slick wetness, cooler than my own, tracing through my slit. Instinctively I pressed back against it. Waiting. What seemed like minutes I knew was only seconds.

I felt his kisses, his nibbles, his tongue tracing over my neck towards my left ear. My quickened breathing escaped through my opened, tensed lips. As he whispered, "I'm going to fuck you," I felt his hips press into my ass cheeks.

Slowly, firmly he entered me. I felt the stretch. Pleasure that at times felt like erotic pain.

He paused once inside me. As I adjusted, accepting his length and girth, he began rocking in and out. His left hand reached around my hip to my clit. He began stroking me. His index and middle ringers separated as each gathered the wetness oozing outward; spreading it upward. Each upward finger stroke, every deep penile thrust, my clit got harder and shrunk ever more deep into my vulva.

I planted my feet. I pushed backward. I felt him shifting forward. His balls crashing into my clitoris and his wrist while his hips continued slapping against my ass cheeks.

We came...no...we exploded together. My orgasm began first. My vagina grasped him like a velvet vise. I felt him press, no, it was more like he was pushing hard into me. Suddenly he ballooned out. His base thickened. Then I felt it! A series of very hot, intense spurts inside me... We both cried out....

This is one of the best stories on this site. I loved how this built, hos Jess was obsessed with Diane and couldn't seem to help herself. How Diane came to rely on Jess, neither on wanting to change what was happening but both wishing it could.

This was terrific with pleasing pace and such attracting dignified characters. I am glad they made each other happy

Simply one of the best on this site.

I just enjoyed this so much! Couldn't keep my hands off myself......lol

what a true moving story. i so wish to read an update. thanks so much.

A beautiful story that is beautifully written.

Great and spicy , well written story. I noticed that it was out of employee point of view mostly. same story where the focus on boss feelings would be fun too as it lacks on this one. solid 4 is rated. The silence 'mood ' wasn't very sexy tho

I can see why they would be very happy together, glad to hear that they are still together, where they able to be a couple openly in public at any point?

I love this story. Have come back to it several times. Yes it's lesbian but it could easily be filed under romance.

So well written. A delight to read.

True about getting off to relieve stress tension. Unless you cross that line where the stress means that you can't raise a smile much less anything else.! I quit practice due to it! Wished I had had an assistant to "help me prepare" that way! Lol!

I love the story, your best one in my opinion, would love to read a sequel to this, 5 stars

This is one of the best Lesbian Erotica's I've read. I stumbled across it years ago and it showed me the talent that's going about on this site. Thanks for writing it, you've made a lot of folks very (satisfied) happy.

This story at the hands of another writer might have slipped down a meandering cheesy road all the way to over the topish mushdomness.

Yet, RedEmerald, in spot-on dialogue and train of thought and with battering delicatesse, no-holds-barred subtlety and excruciating precision, makes it a wonderful story about two beautiful, smart, intelligent people on a well lubricated path to love ever after.

That the story is based on real events helps things, of course. But this doesn't take anything away from RedEmerald using just the right amount of sugar, spice, salt and pepper to season and serve a dish which becomes a degustation to anybody who likes to indulge in some excellent storytelling, on whatever subject.

Exemplary writing this is.

This is an absolutely brilliant story, the writing is high quality and I found the plot realistic and very satisfying. I cannot wait until my fiancée returns so that I can use these oral techniques to pleasure her. I am a straight guy but this is super hot!

just read this for the 2nd time

it was so good I had to read it again

a very hot and well written story. I loved it

This story is the most viewed lesbian story...and this about the 20th time I've read this story, since 2010, when I first came across it. There's simply nothing like it on this part of the site, in my opinion. The love scenes feel so organic, and real. Outstanding writing...it would play really well on film.

you crafted a gorgeous work of art and shared it with any and all readers who'd happen upon it. that's remarkable. i'm honored to have read this chef d'oeuvre. i consider myself a better-than-average writer, but this amazing story reminds me that there are real works of genius out there. thank you, thank you, thank you!

I've read this story several times and after each time, I grow to love it even more.

Thank you. That was the most beautiful erotic story I've read in years. I keep coming back to it and loving it even more.

My second reading, and just as terrific as the first. I know I'm just echoing many other reviews, but the truth will out, as they say. This was the most agonizingly erotic work I've had the pleasure of reading. You wrapped the reader in a soft, silken sheet of teasing, torturous action to a plot culmination of...well, if I must I'll repeat myself - perfection. No hurry-up or crudities; I don't see how you managed it. Please accept my appreciation for an exceptional work.

That was a thrill. A real story!

That was easily the most beautiful, touching, and erotic story I have ever read on this site. I kind of wish there was a sequel!

Incredibly erotic and loving at the same time! I loved this story! thank you for sharing it with us!

I simply just adore this wonderfully sexy story. I've read it several times and it always leaves me tingly in all the right places. Mmm.

I've read and reread this story for years. Adorably sexy, and definitely leaves me with a tingle!

I have read this story since 2011. Looking back, that's a whole 7 years ago. I was a teenager then, only 16. I've read all 3 of the stories you've uploaded on literotica numerous times ; disappointed that you have never returned to the site to upload new fiction.

Please come back. You really have a talent and a knack for writing. Your characterisations are always relatable and realistic.

Please come back

...who would have thought? Loved this story, it was sweet and, yes, sexy too. Thanks!

This story was a wonderful read. Thank you for your efforts. Author should definitely consider creating original works, if she hasn't already.

Also, to the anonymous poster: you must lack basic reading comprehension skills and/or common sense, because this story is listed under the lesbian sub-category. Might wanna check those before you click a story, yeah?

Because elsewise, this was a pathetic attempt at being a troll.

Whoever once joked "kill all the lawyers" certainly never met your amazing characters! Long live those lesbian here's!!

This is, without a doubt, one of the hottest stories on Literotica, and yet the love you feel when reading it is so very good too! Thanks for sharing this with us!

Simply beautiful! Thank you

I loved how this built up. The seeming innocence of the assistant just 'helping'. Very sexy.

OK First I want you to know that in reading this I took the true story part to heart. I found it to be such a deeply moving story and feel these women deserve the love they feel for each other. I after meeting my dear departed babygirl became a hopless romantic (lol) and this story really touched me. You did an excellent job putting it down in writing. Thank you and Thank your friends for sharing it with the rest of us.

Why do I keep coming back to read this story again and again? Because it is simply one of the best stories on this site. That's why!

And keep coming back to it, over and over again! I love your stories RedEmerald, and wish you would write more. Thank you for sharing this with us!

I loved this, you create the picture beautifully, I just enjoyed reading it so much.

And yes I was a little misty eyed towards the end. :)

Fantastic details with the oral sex, made me wet.

Fantastic length...as I finally came right before the kiss. I was sopping wet and biting my lip the whole time!

This is the best love story I've read in a long time. I hope they still are as much in love and lust. I've fantasized many times about somebody finding me in my office revealing my panties as I touch myself and kneeling down to kiss me where it most helps

I loved the blossoming love story far more than the sexual exploits which finally occurred on Page 5. To me, a lifelong lesbian, the beauty of sex is not centered on our vagina. Sure that plays a part, a big part, but we never start there. Cuddling, roaming hands, gentle talk, even proper lighting are needed forerunners.

I would love to hear how this story moves on. Obviously, they need to move in together, with Jessie being trained for bigger roles. As a lover iit would never work to have the Senior Partner's Personal Assistant, one of several at the same time. Perhaps they can give her an adjoining office as the Office Manager (appropriately trained) as they move forward. Of course being taken care of at night would relieve much of the need for daytime service.

You have a great 10 year old story that itself was 10 years old. That is a large part of any career. Build on this with growth, travel, and does Jessie retire when her wife who would now be in her 60s retire.

Thanks,

Beth

This was so fucking good. I’m like in love with my boss so this story was extra yummy

I keep returning and rereading this. I’ve lost count of how many times. Love it so much I can’t even say. Author, you are amazing!

The best I've read so far, please write more.

What an awesome story! 😊

Absolutely amazing, incredibly passionate, and intensely hot.

Not to mention loving! Very much so.

A hell of a chance to take, considering the risks involved. But sometimes you just have to take that chance, and hope for the best.

Knowing that this story is true, I can only say, Ladies, I wholeheartedly wish you a lifetime of love.

To the Author, thank you so much for putting this into print!

5 Stars, and an Instant Favorite.

Thanks again!

I hope you continue to write. Beautifully developed and written.

I came really hard. Thank you

Enjoyed your tender, thougtful, and moving story.

That was an amazing story. The fact that it was based on real events made it even better. Also you are a terrific writer. I gave the story five stars.

Now I have to fantasize about almost all the female bosses I've had over the years, wishing I could have worshiped their pussies for them like this, almost every day.

Except one. She was sexy as hell, but she was the cruelest bitch I ever worked with.

I was holding my breath at times I realised, connecting with Jessie's situation of lust and love. This was so well structured and really glad it ended in the way it did. My brain can now fill in the 'happily ever after'. The sex scenes were so well written, describing so accurately that point of ecstasy where the 'receiver' can be so lost in their pleasure but restless as they want to grip hold of something or someone and draw them ever closer. So well done! Yes RedEmerald, this was a gem.

This was very hot and I truly felt for Jessica, the ending though, I think I finally know what it means tears of joy, I think you could have written it without sex and made it very touching as it is it is both very hot and very touching. Thank You

OMG I'm so erect!

Great story.

Would you write a sequel please? I have been re-reading this lovely story over the years and still craving to see more about them. Wishing myself lucky enough to read more of your beautiful works before I died:)

Thanks a million for sharing your talent with us.

Wow ... that’s all I have to say .. that was amazing.. a slow buildup .. I loved this story ... it was perfect ... thank you ...

Very well written, great job. It could have only been written by a woman with that kind of detailed description that has experienced it herself. Please come back and write some more slow seduction stories. I loved it. I had an erection the entire time I was reading it. I want more please.

You succeeded. It is highly erotic and I'm glad I came across your name then found this story.

This is one of the best things I have read on here. Your characters are great. I loved the build up and uncertainty between them. You're an amazing writer. Thank u.

If only...

....there was a chance I could describe all pleasure given, the way you did

...write such an incredible story in just so few words

...there were 5 more stars to give to you

...I could hold you and thank you for giving me the opportunity to share this with you.

I just deal with the thought that there's two people very happy. Thank you!

I could feel the turmoil as the story progressed. I am also a sucker for a bit of romance, so you checked all the boxes for me. Thank you.

What a great story, well written and the fact that it is a true story makes it a lot hotter

Siskel and Ebert gives it two cocks up !

Superb!

I could give you 55... stars or a membership to Star Alliance for your stories and this in particular. Congratulations