All Comments on 'Mercurial Ends Ch. 03'

by TalyisBagley

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EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 11 years ago
This chapter

Seemed to have the cohesiveness that the previous two lacked. I really like these two and I really hope that poor girl can focus on getting her life back. Glad to see you writing again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
LOVE IT

I CHECK YOUR PAGE EVERYDAY. I LOVE THIS STORY. PLEASE MAKE SHY PROPOSE TO TABOR.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I <3 SHY

OMG! U r back! I thought U were gone. Im so glad u are continuing this story. I loved Of Thorns & Talons. Please don't leave again. I will huntu down and make u write. J>K

i was looking for vampire stories and saw ur name!!! i dont know why the low score. i almost didnt click on ur story but i recognize ur name!! i am so stoked. this is a great chptr!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
Excellent!

Tabor has a bad case of PTSD and Ilsino is only making things worse for her. His knowledge of power auras makes him as dangerous to her as he is useful.

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