All Comments on 'Neighbors Ch. 01'

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MindFucker almost 11 years ago

Great story !

Mmm yes I love this type of story - turns me on very juicily !! The only criticism I have is with the word lied (means you told a lie )- I think it should be lay and with having the same word on the same line - otherwise I enjoyed it very much!!

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Fairly new to erotic writing. I write to create works that are not the stereotypical stories, I am aiming to write so that women may enjoy my stories as much as couples. Men may think my stories too tame, but my stories may be something erotic that a couple can share. Also ...

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