All Comments on 'November Third'

I loved the plot and story line. The sex was okay, but the setup blew me away. I agree with other poster, would go well in an extended novel of some sort. It's not often that I read a one page story (especially an erotic one) and I end up emotionally involved and feeling sorry for the guy.

Very well written story; belongs in a novel. You described the situation and scenery very well, and you also left the end of the story open to imagination. Thank you very much.