All Comments on 'Office Affair Ch. 00 (Prelude)'

by Sxytnk

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
how incredibly sad!!!

but what an awesome start to a story. Hopefully, her husband discovers what an ass he's being...not likely, but hopefully. Otherwise, I hope she meets a guy who would treat her the way she deserves.

LoneStarRiderLoneStarRiderover 12 years ago
a bit short....

Short, but then, it IS listed as a prelude.

It's a sad tale, really. If it were real life, the question would be whether the daughter would be better served with Hubby being kicked to the curb and genuine love found for Mom, vs living in "peaceful coexistence" until the daughter leaves home.

[By the way, some names to attach would be nice.]

BigTXTeddyBearBigTXTeddyBearover 12 years ago
I liked it

I did enjoy how you wrote it more from the point of view woman and not just as a story about some one.

Good job

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Its true

The sad part is; I know its true...

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