All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

Great tale. As I read it, I looked at a picture of my own Mom and masturbated to her, looking at ther tits and her feet. When I was little, I sued to play shoe salesman with her and I would steal little kisses on her pretty feet. When I was a teen ager, we visited another town and I watched her mate with someone who wasn't my Dad.

Wonderful story, full of love, romance and sex ... every persons dream ... finding true love with the two women he most admired and worshiped ... Thank you for the pleasure.

A Fan and Admirer,

Michelle Jo

great story, hope you add to it.

woah! that is such a great and moving story, i like these sorts of stories and i have been up for 2-3 hrs reading it (slow reader hehe) it made me hard thinkin bout patty :)

Great ramance story, hope the author makes more

Its the best sex story ever written!! It fulfills evryones fantasies!!

Incredible work. Fantastic descriptions and use of synonyms. Please keep writing such great work fur us all to enjoy!

thank you for sharing. I think they may have another story, when thier kid's grow up?

Wonderful story, oh if life were only half that good.

A very good example of how honesty can lead to ecstasy. Really loved the ending. Thank you.

I loved this story, and read it while naked. Nearly made me cum! Wish I had a sister and mother like that.

Hot. I'm still shaking from it. I wish I had a brother like that.

i am 20 an my sister is 18 and my mother is 36 thats all we do i learnt english from this story

Fabulous story. Had me on the edge of climax the whole while while reading it. Asked my girl friend to read it which she did. We then had the most wonderful sex. Great job. Looking forward to more. Thank you.

i loved your story i was sad when it was over keep writting

i enjoyed your story more than you could imagine

Thanks for a great story. It was easy to understand and read, unlike a lot of the other stories. You are a great author!

I have read many stories in Literotica and on other websites. This one is by far the best.

Man this the the best i read it yet.

This was a hot story but I felt there could be more description of the first time the daughter has sex. I also found the storyline a little choppy.

The ending was a little cheesy though.

I would like to begin by saying that I rather loved this story, that while the simple concept of happily ever after is indeed a cliche,' it is still quite lovely. Real relationships such as those happening in this story are quite difficult to construct...To hold together. What manner of ceramonies should then be given? Some peoples of the world permit for multiple partner marriages, so obviously, some sense of these aspects should follow, at least in the views of the multiple parterns, that they all love each other, but is it then so that they are all brothers and sisters? Perhaps, but who then can really say.

Why does this naughty topic so interest me as it does so many others? The Taboo aspects are always good...True, but surely there is something more that so entices us...The warped version of love and its expression in the flesh...Of the flesh? Between family especially. I do not often bother with commenting, but it is stories like this that I must do that for, if nothing else. The pregnancy concept...For future reference, it should be known that the child is simply one aspect of the love they share, an embodiment of that love and what has transpired from it, a blessing, by no means a curse. I personally love it when a story includes this aspect, though in this story, it was sadly glossed over, it would have been lovely to see a bit more interaction between the family as a whole, sexual or not.But to see them cherish their young. Whenever I write erotic literature for my fans, I always include this aspect, or hint at it, as it does so please me and often pleases them. Love and commitment. Though it may not be for everyone, it is often times apprecaited, if only just a sentiment.

Well, take care and do keep up the good work.

-S.

i am a young girl in teens and have a brother whi almost 5 years older than me.After reading your story I have decided to start exposing my very sexy breasts to him and see how he reacts. You really have shaken me up. I am wet all over.

loved it. My youger sister enjoyed it more than me.We love reading such stories and do kiss each other but coming to doing real stuff we find it dificult. Now she seems to be agreing after reading your story. It is so realistic. Thanks

this story was so good, this made me wish that i had a brother

Ohh yeah, that story is really exciting..

Loved it. Brought back memories of 30 years ago when I lost my virginity to MY brother. I was 18 and my brother 19 (there's only 11 months between us) - we spent a whole summer making out. It was truly awesome sex. And yes - our union did result in me getting pregnant (no-one knew it was my brother's baby though) - a little boy named Davy - I gave him up for adoption - he'll be turning 30 next March! Thank's for the memories hun. Love Summer xx

YOU MAKE ME SICK! "I wish i had a brother" shit like that.. NO! How could you possibly want to have sexual relations with a family member? And as for that loser that said she lost her virginity to her brother NO! You are sick, i think you should try counciling. People need to focus, not have all this incest shit! This is discusting, and no way a true story, thats for sure. Why would you write something like this?! NO!

to the guy who said NO! FUCK YOU ITS A EALLY GOOD STORY!!!

Fuck you too, baby it's a sick story made for sick minds who don't know idoicy when they read it.

This story makes me wish I had a hot perverted sister and a hot perverted mem. The things I would do to them! It would be fabulously wonderful!

You are probably one of the best writers on this site, the story line was great as were the characters. You are GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!

What is all the fuss about? Running this through a simple spelling/grammar check in a word processor would have done wonders. The changes between scenes are choppy and the plot is nonexistant.<BR><BR>I suppose you might find some value if you just skip to the sex and can ignore all the jarring errors in the fuck scenes, but otherwise save your time.

I loved that story, and as I read I remembered my first time with my mother and her sister, on a camping trip! Both are over fifty... too bad... no children! That's okay though, my sister is five months pregnant with our second daughter!

I understand the draw of the taboo but this sad little tale held all the sensuality of a Dr. Seuss book without the humor. Plus, spelling and grammar made it so hard to read that it was worthless. And what in the hell is so sensual about mutiple consonants? They aren't mutiple orgasms and don't make a story any better. Get a life and please, keep your day job.

HOLY SHIT YOU GUYS ARE DUMBASSES THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ but still to the person who said they lost there verginity to there brother thats still kinda sick even tho my sis is actually pretty hot herself

Hats off to the writer who made a great work of art. enough said

i loved that story it means a lot to me ive been jacking off to pictures n videos of my sister for years and i always fantasized about my mom i wish i could get blow jobs from them and hav threesums :D

rawr =3

im 15, sister's 13, moms 36

best storie i have ever read cudos!!!!!!!

I loved the story. I know what it is like to be able to fuck a mom and a sister. This story reminded me of that. I don't think I shot a load that far before.

are you goin to write a continuation of this episode?,i absolutely loved this story

i jack off to my mom a lot, keep making these

That was honestly the best story I've ever read with one of the best endings I've ever read. Keep up the amazing work!

that was really good. i loved it!

Really Enjoyed this.

this is one of the best stories ive read on here:)

wat an awesome story.... god wat it would b like to fuck my mom nd sister..... god i got a boner right now

This story was truly the best i have read.

I am nw officially a incest lover!

thanx for your brilliance!

IM GONNA GO RAPE MY MOM AND FUCK HER HARD THEN MY SISTER!!!!!!!! NO im kidding.. nice story though.

It's too bad that this lifestyle is not accepted in our current culture. However, were it culturaly correct, perhaps the sexual edge generated by our current taboos would be absent and dull an otherwise extremely sexual event as is demonstrated herein. But it's a nice thought to entertain for the purpose of the thrill of sex. You know, if everybody's doing it, somehow the thrill is gone...but

I can dream, can't I?

Love, Himself

I love inscest stories, and I've read many written on here. When I read this one though, I got wetter than I ever have. It was brilliant. A must read.

I don't usually read or like incest fiction, but this was the most incredibly erotic fiction - - incest or not - - that I have ever read. You are extremely talented.

Quite well done.

nice, goofy, INcredible, fun story about a subject as well as a set of events that are highly imprabable and yet it is a story that we just say, fuck "reality"... let's just enjoy the tongue in cheek nicety of the little white-noise story!

this was a great story, wish I had a sis that would do me, I love incest storie they really turn me on keep up the good work

very nice story easy to read and easy to enjoy the begining lured you in and the rest just proved worth the wait hope to read more of your work great job and thank you

one of the best incest stories Ive read

love me but would never do it myself not with mum or sis anywayz

I loved the story and i my self have wished many times that i fucked my mom my 1/2 sis and my stepmom I came close to doing my mom but didnt

Really enjoyed your story. I can only hope that it was written from known facts. I also enjoyed the caring the showed between the mother , sister and brother. I hope you continue with this series.

that was really really goodd

did the baby have down syndrom?? lol

What can I say. WOW. 'uitstekend' in English. Excellent. Totally the best story I have read. Keep it up. From South Africa.

Extremely well written, good intro and story development, kept me reading all the way to the end. One of the best stories here. Keep up the good work

this is one of the best stories i have ever read and i have read alot lol i like incest stories mainly ones bout mums and daughters or twin sisters but this story was very excellent

loved da story bru. hehe iv dun my mom wen she was drunk, i stil do my sis almost evri nyt and i dun my cousin 7 times. so ya readin dis story made me get my sis 2 cum sit on my lap while we read it. hehe. FRM WHITE BOI

A son with sister and mother is an insane sexual rush to say the least. To be able to spend a summer with your mother and sister at a summer beach home together is more than any fantasy that I would Love to hear more of. So a follow up on these three would be an awaiting pleasure to read about them.

One of the best I've ever read! Do you plan a Father Daughter sequel?

I thought this story was unbelievable but I thought it was kinda silly that both the mother and sister fell head over heels in love with the son. If only 1 of them married the son or both got pregnant at tha same time, would've rocked totally.

very erotic and made me wish i had a sis. but maybe only do 1 page intro not 2 next time.

great flow loved it

Your story was excellent...absolutely riveting!!!! Moreeeeeeeeeeeeee PLEASE!!!!!!!

I liked the sex, liked the romance! (also I had an orgasm)

This story was intense enough actually to almost get me feeling queasy about the incest, which other incest stories I have read don't quite manage. I guess that is a compliment? Take it how you like!

A very gentle story, well writen and writen with feeling.

This is the MOST erotic story I have ever read. So fantastic an 18 year old young man and his hot mom and sister, just fucking forever. Great I Just Loved This Story

I like the characters, especially the sister...but it leaves something to be desired in the area of sex scenes. Too few. Too short.

The story went a little quickly into the whole threesome marrage bit, but overall I enjoyed it.

Loved this story! Keep up the good work

I loved reading it. The whole time i was reading it wasnt just "oh im reading an incest story teehee" more like "WOW, this is awesome and its breaking personal barriers!". Definitely one of the best stories i've read on this site.

I liked the basic idea of the story. There wasn't too much detail in the sex scenes, that was a bit disappointing. And the whole marriage stuff kind of took away from the story. But all in all, I'd say it's a pretty good read. Got me in the mood, so what more could I ask? Keep up the good work!

nice to feel the application of the writer, not only has the romance been highlighted but the final frontiers have been kept short, neat and full justice has been done to the emotions. touched...

I remember moving to another state where no one knew us so mom and her sisters and my sisters could have there babies. Over the years we had many more together.

This is the MOST erotic story I have ever read. So fantastic an 18 year old young man and his hot mom and sister, just fucking forever. Great I Just Loved This Story

the story, the characters the plotting everything is awesome.... i speciallllly liked it because it left just the perfect amount of emphasis on the sex scenes which turns it into a classic instead of just a porn story..... it is simply awe inspiring

this was just great, i really liked the development of the charcters, and the love between them before they even had sex, keep up the great work!!!!!!

9 inch

I never read a story thats longer than a page. I would like you to know..... THAT I LOVED it. from beginning to end.!

Wow...that's some real writing skill there.

And I totally loved it.

You build the suspense perfectly for each scene. Very believable. The scenes are so well set that they're almost tangibly real. You could have taken the actual sex out and it would still have been a deep, engrossing, provocative read. Thankyou for sharing!

I dont usually read incest but this one caught my eye and im glad it did. i loved the sexual tension, how you built it up. you are a brilliant, i will be sure to read more of your work if possible. cheers mate. ~ The GrandMaster

I have erectile dysfunction, but can cumm. I found your story so compelling my cock became partially erect. thank you. drulonj

Very well written and incredibly erotic. Well done.

Hey....Can You Make a squeal to this?

heya this was great it just caught my eye whilst search and i loved it great story..

your story was awesome and you need to write more.

I've read hundreds of stories on Literotica, and this is story instantly soared to one of my top three favorites.

Remarkeble true pkeasurable erotic story. Cant wait 2 c more.

God you are the best there is.

one of the most realistic I have ever read.

keep it cumming!!!

this was the best story i've read in a long time. splendid language, characters and plot. congratulations!

One of the best most actual occuring sounding stories I have read in a long time....wish I could have been Bobby for sure! I kind of put myself in his ahh bare feet a few times...

Your prose is delectable. While I found the story sexually exciting I also wondered what would happen next with Bobby, Patty and their mother. The romantic setting on the Atlantic barrier island did wonders to set these characters free in my mind. I found it as artistically pleasing as I did in other ways.

I've seen a number of requests for a sequel to this but I don't know, I think this is perfect as it stands. The characters are realistic, the plot is good without deviation and the pacing is perfect.

Thanks for the entertaiment, keep it up (no pun intended!)

conzir2001

Good Storyline

great storyline, easy to follow, hot hot sex..awesome, im a long time reader of your stories and they just keep impressing me.

GOD I GOT SO HOT I HAD TO CALL MY WIFE AND HAVE HER COME HOME,AND WE HAD THE BEST SEX WE EVER HAD IN ALL OUR 30 YRS OF MARRAGE.DAMN WRITE SOME MORE.

THANKS COLIE

Very, very well done! I enjoyed this story quite a bit. It was very sexy, very easy to read and I never once got bored.

Good job.