All Comments on 'One Dark Night Deserves Another Ch. 01'

The story lost a lot of steam for me once it became about the ball gag and actual non-consent as opposed to some resistance turning into lust. Kristen leaves defeated dejected and a shamed which makes what could have been a hot experience just kinda sad.

A coaxed experience with greater seduction and mutual satisfaction imo would have been hotter. The premise that freshman girls are looking for an excuse to experience lesbian sex is a good one, and a predatory upperclassmen works well however I don't think this resulted in the kind of experience that Kristen will look back on fondly, and eventually girls imo should and would break the silence on this and Heather should end up going to jail.

The story was well written and the concept has promise I just think that it went a bit too far and it kinda ruined the premise.

There's nothing erotic about rape.

Naysayers shouldn't even bother reviewing. This story is hot.

this is hot im def saving it for later reading...and FTR rape isnt cool but its the suspense that frills me, the reluctance-everything leading up to it

Very interesting chapter one. Didn't know "Heather" had it in her to do something like that. Can't wait to find out what happens in chapter 2 when I get back.