All Comments on 'Overworked and Worked Over Ch. 05'

But I find your story good, but unreal at the same time. I am a blk woman and if I was looking for a blk man . They would not have any of the awesome traits that your character has. But it is a good story. Excellent writing, hope you continue.

I've never met a guy that has all of the characteristics that Malcolm has either--maybe it's just wishful thinking.....I totally don't think it's mean--I appreciate your honesty and the encouragement!

and on time for the both of them.

Such an incredible writer, keep it up

is there another part to this story?

There will definitely be a Chapter 6. Not sure beyond that. But I've already got another project brewing with a male character that is not the nice guy that Malcolm is....

Whens the next comin?

Please write more loving this story

Just amazing. This is my modern fairy tale. Every detail. Hot, steamy, sensual and oh so sweet. Loved every chapter!!!!!

I'm just overworked myself right now and haven't had time to write (unfortunately, I'm not being worked over at the same time...lol).....but I promise, I'm not done with these 2 yet.....

Seriously hoping you find the time to finish this... Its such a compelling story - seriously gotten into it! So pleassee don't keep us waiting much longer LOL. X

I finally found the time to pound out the ending to this story.....it went in a direction I hadn't anticipated (these characters have a mind of their own!) but I hope you enjoy! I've submitted but it's still pending approval.....sorry it's taken me so long!

xoxo,

Dina

Is it taking so long to get approved?