All Comments on 'Party People'

this isnt really swinging. Just drunk fools playing in trash.

This submission is horribly written and that's all anyone can say about it.

However I can't put my finger in what is missing in it.

Nicely written, but abrupt end. Maybe a follow-on story would be in order to better understand the characters.

This story has a lot of potential for many different avenues. Cheating. Revenge. Love. Polygamy. BDSM. Group. Etc... If FTDS's criteria is acceptable for literotica so that another may continue an abandoned story, then this story qualifies. So I'd like to invite others to read it and post some thoughts on continuing the story in the hope that it draws the interest of someone who will write a new chapter.