All Comments on 'Penny's Visit'

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estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Be Careful Not to Reach an Organism

When you're trying for an orgasm. Keep your hands off those organisms! Formulaic story--how did they meet, why did she care, how did they hook up? Without that, it's a less-than-mediocre stroke story.

alexcarralexcarrover 13 years agoAuthor
Penny's visit

Yes I shall thank you, I tend to rush them a bit, some complain they dont want the leadup, just the sex you see, but I must watch my organisms HUH? (Orgasms)

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