by rgraham666
R I love this scene, it's beautifully done, from the playful and loving enthusiasm, right down to every warm and sexy detail. Well done. :) Just what I needed to read this morning.
It's really a very sweet story. Full with vivid details and excellent story telling.
I only wish there were more character development. Maybe because the story was about you and someone you knew so well, you did not feel the need to expand more on the characters, to make that connection with the reader.
In any case, good job.
A very nice piece, unassuming and tender, yet passionate. The feeling of sex with affection made it a pleasure to read.
What a handy way of fixing a sore back. I will have to remember this for just such an occurance.
Very delightfully done, love.
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Lovely, beautiful, passionate .... steeeemy. This could be my favorite of all your work. Will have to check again carefully to be sure ; D
A quick trip to the 'Money Shot. Love the relentless way the main character has his way with his lover. Another good one!