All Comments on 'PTA Volunteer'

Such detail! Romance and dominance rolled into one! Please write more chapters.

Loved the story and the location sounds exactly like Seattle. I'm betting it is.

Want more, please.

This Is Such A Beautiful Start Of A Very

Sexciting Story.

Please Continue This Story. Pretty Please !

Kisses

more more more

I can hardly wait for the following chapters on this story. When will it continue?

This was a lovely, touching and sexy story. I agree with others who have asked for this story to continue.

Fabulous story & am looking forward to more.

A very beautiful and romantic story, please continue it,-yes,?.3f66

Dump hubby and start your family with Christine

This story is a great contrast to your BDSM story, although "who's knows what evil lurks" in Christine's mind?

Great story! Extremely well written. Although, it became a bit sappy at times. I love the subtle theme of dominance in this story and hope you will continue along those lines if you do decide to write more on this story.

This is a very yummy story and so sensory. I could almost smell their heat, perhaps it was me.

I think it would be interesting to include the hubby after the two women have explored each other a few more times in great detail. It is always a good thing to teach the hubby how to better pleasure his woman or women, if he is lucky.

I liked the sort of mommy/teaching that was going on, too. Interesting. A BDSM take on it with the hubby might be good too!

Excellent story of seduction and forbidden love.

Please continue this story. It is one of the most erotic and moving stories that I've read on this site. I really enjoy your writing, story development, romantic slant and story lines.

Kara dumps her old man, runs away with Christine and lives happily ever after; hoorah!!!!

You make me feel like I am in the story and I can't wait for more of this romantic tale.

This story lack depth and build up, it made me nauseous every time Christine called Kara baby when it was so premature. It came out of the blue, it just did not warm my heart to watch them fall in love. I found both characters selfish, Kara was a stay at home mom whose child is in school all day what did she spend her time doing, cheating on her husband while he is out providing for his family. As a women that offends me b/c it makes us look cheap. She did not consider her child in this situation, how would the break up of his family affect him long term. Plus she was straight then all of a sudden gay w/o any internal turmoil.

I also noticed every couple in these stories are stunning no one is average, where do u all live on the planet if beauty, all am saying make this these stories with a little realism. They are many authors here who makes u fall in love with the characters but I did not like both characters, I was routing for the husband, not a selfish bitch of a wife who cares nothing for her family only her needs, family equals sacrifice of self.

Hello,

I really enjoyed this little story,it's not perfect,but I'll have to read more of your work to see just how good you are-a very,very good start,though!!!!!!!

Regards,

Lindsay.

This is a fab story!!! Thanks for writing. New love is always very exciting. I've enjoyed your tale of love. Please don't worry about any horrid negativity placed in your comments. If people don't like the stories ... Then just don't read them. Easy!!

I, as well as lots of others have enjoyed the beginnings of Kara and Christine.

What an unexpected and delightful surprise to find a story that does more to explore feelings than deliver scripted prose of simply sexual acts! I loved this story! Please write more!

What a wonderful piece of writing! I especially love the seduction scene, and I appreciate how they take their time and let the emotions build. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I liked the development of this story. Having only read a couple of your stories, it seems like a favorite device in your stories is for the ingenue to have latent or undiscovered lesbian tendencies. This seems to make it easier for women like Kara to accept their emerging sexuality without the traditional guilt associated with homosexuality. This is what makes your stories so wonderful to read because these women make the difficult choice between happiness and an unfulfilled life. Now for the critiques: The story ended with Kara leaving with Christine presumably standing in the door. How could this be when they arrived there in Christine's car and entered through the garage? Lastly, it seems to me that 'floor' would be more appropriate than 'ground' when describing where articles of clothing are dropped or thrown.

This story is so well written. There is a lightness of touch and its already quite erotic. Yum ! Cant wait to read more.

you are definitely my favorite author on this site, the level of detail, the building of suspense and the characters are incredible. You should publish!

absolutely amazing to read... i cannot wait to continue!

It is One of the Best Story I read on Literotica... Eager to read next part.....

Good start, but found the repetitive `baby' more than irritating, however I suspect that our author is gay herself. I feel this as there was no rush into the use of the dreaded strap-on, why lesbian stories go this route is beyond my understanding, but hopefully Kara will find more time to explore her lesbian side,

This was so good. I'm ready for chapter two.

Good so far. On to chapter two I go.

Enjoyed the story....very much looking forward to reading the next installments. 1 little detail at the end: there was no indication in the story that Christine and Kara live within walking distance of one another. So, Christine needed to 'drive' Kara home. Regardless, I'm hooked. I'll continue onward with great anticipation.

I was so turned on, did everything but cum. well written.

Not sure that I like the "slut" bit, seems to devalue the sensitivity shown elsewhere, but other than that I loved it.

The build up was amazing. You really felt their chemistry. Well done!

I gave my cunt a good rubbing while I read this,well done

yeah ignore the haters i mean really her being selfish the dirtbag husband does not even give a shit about her she is basicly like a throphy wife to her and thats it he did not help her with giving her kid a bath hell he did not even help out in the mourning she is more a parent to her kid then the father goddamn you people are stupid

I love that this character is doing something that makes her feel good and feel alive. Her circumstances hit home and is very real to many people. Her husband is like many others, including my ex, reading their evening exchanges felt like I was reading my diary or something. I never had the balls to take that step but i’m Living vicariously here. Good job!

This story should cause all women to gravitate towards Lesbianism if not permanently at least for exploratory purpose. Furthermore with Kara and Christine's sexual drive and orgasms even a Male wished he was a woman. One of the best stories I read so far, please continue the story. I'm totally surprised that with the intensity and multiple of orgasms that they don't end up in a coma, just joking.

Two people, one 46 and the other 25, the older, more experienced person should have known to back off and let the situation pull back from the adrenaline driven moment. Let Kara think through the possible ramifications apart from the “feelings.” Then if she wants to move forward she can with the full realization that she is cheating on her husband. All of the physical pleasures they enjoyed won’t change that fact. Kara deserves to make that choice as sober as possible not drunk on sex. She owes it to her son who she seemingly forgot.

How had I missed this in my exploration of sapphic writers? Genuinely an instant classic. I will read more of your work before placing you on a pedestal, but I will be shouting your praises to all of those who seek a wonderful writer of Lesbian erotica.

The story was believable from the beginning. An older woman teaches a younger lady who is neglected by her spouse. A story as old as time.

Thank you for a brief relief from a boring afternoon.

5 Stars.