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Click hereRachael was about to have another 'first'... but was not prepared for what it would entail or the feelings that would engulf her as a result.
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Victoria_2001_02769about 14 years agoAuthorI am so glad you finally got internet and were able to finish reading the story... and so happy to know you enjoyed it! I hope to be able to get back to my writing soon.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI started reading this many months back on a friend's laptop. After years of refusal, I finally got internet to get the end of the story.
Victoria_2001_02769about 15 years agoAuthorThank you for your comments and constructive critism. I am so glad to know you have thoroughly enjoyed the series so far. It is my fond hope to get back to creating more storyline between the main duo as well as the possible trio.
I also want to bring more of Peter and his new submissive Virginia into future storyline(s).
Anonymousabout 15 years agoThis was a wonderful story, I thouroughly enjoyed it. You had decent character development, only lacking in that of Rachael, she seems a little wavy, changing tempermants and personalities too quickly. Your dialogue flowed well, and was truly believable. Great job!
Victoria_2001_02769over 15 years agoAuthorI am so tickled that you liked the story within the main story idea. I must confess that at first, I was not sure it belonged... but then as this Chapter unfurled and began to come alive... I realized that it did indeed belong.<br>
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The small story within the story has taken on a life of its own, and the charters of Pete and Virginia have been brought to life... just as Rodger and Rachael. Look for them (Pete/Virginia) to return to or play integral parts in future chapters.<br>
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Chapter 8 is under way... finally!
