by HandcuffGirl
really great stuff! great social commentary and some nice sex mixed in
Lacks the struggle of the heroine that's present in your older FBI agent Kim story...therefore not as erotic.
I think you should slow the pacing down a bit, though. Very hot promise and well-delivered but more details of the sex would make the story a 6 or 7 (instead of the 5 stars I just gave you).