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HogwashHogwashalmost 7 years ago
Good work!

I think you should slow the pacing down a bit, though. Very hot promise and well-delivered but more details of the sex would make the story a 6 or 7 (instead of the 5 stars I just gave you).

neosteeledneosteeledover 12 years ago

Looks to be an intriguing start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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Lacks the struggle of the heroine that's present in your older FBI agent Kim story...therefore not as erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
awesome!

really great stuff! great social commentary and some nice sex mixed in

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