All Comments on 'Rick's Demon Ch. 03'

by drknowone

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Off the beaten path kind of good...

You were definitely original, & added a new twist to the sex. Only thing I'd suggest is including more background info on Rick's anatomical uniqueness, so that when his penis becomes four penises, the reader isn't blindsided so much by what happens.

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