by MidWestPrincess
This was really good you have a lot of talent as a writer keep up with the good work and keep the material cumming
This was really good! Very hot. A bit swift, but all in all a great and fun read. I'm gonna vote for it when I can actually figure out how to!
Very hot and graceful. If this the first attempt at writing then the author has more promising stories lined up for us.
Continue ..great efforts.
Mr.Sam P.(kinkykingfisher@yahoo.com)
Man that was good. Now I wanna try my hand at this!
It was incredible for me. It wasn't the same sort of story I thought it might be from the title, though it was definitely the kind of story that taxes one's inhibitions. unbelievably done, O Midwestern one!
This was a very hot story however it should have been put in group sex. As well there were a few editing issues but overall a hot and sexy story.