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by moll65doll

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Wrong category, I didn't find any humour or satire in this piece. If you want the reader to want more you will have to have more action in the first chapter than this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Potential

The writer took obvious joy in writing the story, the narrator seems fascinated with the suddenly fee woman, and apparently everyone else in the world shares the wonder. Perhaps future chapters will give a clue as to why the reader should join in the worship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I have to agree with the first critiquer

no satire, no humor, nothing really here except a woman who for whatever reason ran her husband off and feels she has something no other woman has.

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