All Comments on 'Temptation Ch. 01'

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SparkedSparkedover 16 years ago
Hmmm...

omg! wat the hell is going to happen next?! I love it so far off to a start that has so many turns! but where exactly did David go? your style of writing isnt very discriptive and that is the only downer...

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Been a long time since I've been on here... spend most of my time on Fetlife.

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