The Big Time Pt. 10

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“She’s awake.” She looked to the right and out of the corner of her eye noticed a man sitting in a chair.

“Yes she is,” said the man who just entered the room. He walked up to her and lifted her chin, offering her a bottle of water. “We want to make sure you’re all moist and ready for the next few hours.”

Eliza thought the man had an unnaturally dark face. Then she realized that he was wearing a ski mask. She sipped some water and spat it back into his eyes. “Let me go.”

The man in black wagged his finger at her. “Now now, Eliza.” He cleared his throat. “I mean, mistress.” Eliza’s eyes widened. “That wasn’t very nice.”

“You?” said Eliza.

“Yes mistress. Me.” He grabbed her by the jaw. “I’ve got a score to settle with you.” Then he stepped to the side and reached for the door.

The man sitting in the chair to Eliza’s right adjusted his tattered, old Bears cap. “So do I.” The door shut with a bang.

Chapter 11 coming soon.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

wow me and my girlfriend spent days and nights reading this amazing story and have had some wild role playing with this story and we want more so please give us more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Series

Enjoying the fantasy land and cannot get enough. More of the same please. Loved the consentual-rape scene with elisha cuthbert. And the dog.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
come on wtf!!!!!!!!

dude seriously how you gonna sit there write write 10 chapters over a period of a yr and then promise a 11th chapter, and i mean come on the las tone was in dec of 2003, i think 4 yrs is enough time to come up with an 11th chapter hell its enought o come up with 200 chapters. wtf seriously thats wrong u could of at least let us know if kirsten and mike get together cause come on thats what everybody wants, oh and by the way theres to much lesbo shit going on theres to be more guy girl action.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
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Oh my god fucking magnificent i just read chapters 1 to 10 in one sitting something i have never done, but don't leave your readers hanging too long, we all want chapter 11 asap. I will give you plenty of props for leaving us eagerly anticipating chapter 11 though

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
chapter 11?

Can you please write a new chapter and not just leave us hanging. It's easily the best story on the site so please continue it

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