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“She’s awake.” She looked to the right and out of the corner of her eye noticed a man sitting in a chair.
“Yes she is,” said the man who just entered the room. He walked up to her and lifted her chin, offering her a bottle of water. “We want to make sure you’re all moist and ready for the next few hours.”
Eliza thought the man had an unnaturally dark face. Then she realized that he was wearing a ski mask. She sipped some water and spat it back into his eyes. “Let me go.”
The man in black wagged his finger at her. “Now now, Eliza.” He cleared his throat. “I mean, mistress.” Eliza’s eyes widened. “That wasn’t very nice.”
“You?” said Eliza.
“Yes mistress. Me.” He grabbed her by the jaw. “I’ve got a score to settle with you.” Then he stepped to the side and reached for the door.
The man sitting in the chair to Eliza’s right adjusted his tattered, old Bears cap. “So do I.” The door shut with a bang.
Chapter 11 coming soon.
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Anonymousabout 10 years agowow me and my girlfriend spent days and nights reading this amazing story and have had some wild role playing with this story and we want more so please give us more
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoEnjoying the fantasy land and cannot get enough. More of the same please. Loved the consentual-rape scene with elisha cuthbert. And the dog.
Anonymousover 16 years agodude seriously how you gonna sit there write write 10 chapters over a period of a yr and then promise a 11th chapter, and i mean come on the las tone was in dec of 2003, i think 4 yrs is enough time to come up with an 11th chapter hell its enought o come up with 200 chapters. wtf seriously thats wrong u could of at least let us know if kirsten and mike get together cause come on thats what everybody wants, oh and by the way theres to much lesbo shit going on theres to be more guy girl action.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoOh my god fucking magnificent i just read chapters 1 to 10 in one sitting something i have never done, but don't leave your readers hanging too long, we all want chapter 11 asap. I will give you plenty of props for leaving us eagerly anticipating chapter 11 though
Anonymousabout 18 years agoCan you please write a new chapter and not just leave us hanging. It's easily the best story on the site so please continue it
Anonymousalmost 19 years agofortunately Whisper Story has gifted us, the readers of literotica, with this magnificant story :) but unfortunately he has left us sitting on our thumbs waiting for part eleven
:( PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU WRITE MORE!!!!
Anonymousabout 19 years agoThis story is by far the best i've read on this web site. It's incredible, awesome writing and all the hottest actresses as well. Please don't stop now!!! can't wait for chapter 11
Anonymousabout 19 years agoHoly cow. I've never done that before.
I just read part I through X starting at 1:00am last night - and now its 9:00pm the next day.
20 straight hours. can you belive it.
what a great story - by far the best i've ever read anywhere online.
Anonymousover 19 years agoWonderful stories. My favorite actresses. Please continue the series. It's been 10 months. I know, it's not easy to write a great story, but... Thanks.
