All Comments on 'The Cat's Meow Ch. 03'

by Mackenzie Taylor

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PennLadyPennLadyover 13 years ago
I like...

the vampire-elf thing, but you switched from first person to third person partway through and it jarred me out of the story. Either is fine, but consistency is needed there.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
like

have been searching for this kind of story.

but most are with humans, which is boring

Hope to read more on :

mermaids, angels, siren, witches, vampire etc (not partner with human)

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