All Comments on 'The Chef'

I'm hungry. I could murder a pie (NOT creamed one).

Great start. I look forward to your next chapter.

This is a great start. With the secret spice the Chef story can go anywhere. First start with the family and then go to the restaurant.

Double commenting!

I thought it was rather good, in under stated sort of way.

And I *hate* goofy teenage stories as well as mind-control category.

When is part 2?

MAKE YOUR FAMILY STRIP EACH OTHER AND GET AN ORGY GOING, EXPAND IT WITH OTHER MEMBERS SUCH AS COUSINS AND THIER PARENTS. THEN DRUG THE ENTIRE RESTERAUNT STAFF AND COUSTOMERS FOR AN ORGY. LOTS OF VIRGINS PLEASE!

hurry with the other parts i can't wait to read them

I want to know what else he wil do. This is a great story so far.

I can't wait for another chapter

Another interesting story but again, sadly, no sequel. I really would have liked to read more of your work. Both stories had great potential