All Comments on 'The Deal Ch. 03'

Very good. Hope you don't make us wait to long this time. Also maybe you can make your chapters longer.

I lov your story please keep writing and keep telling this wonderful story.

Like the continuation but a few things need explaining. Unless I missed it no reason was given for Mike being at Paris' apartment or for Isla being outside when Mike came out. I personally would like to see more open communication between the two. This kissing should tell each one how the other feels but you sort of gloss over it. Good character development but I think you should flesh out their relationship and feelings for each other. Mike let her go four years ago and she left even when she wanted to stay. They both should have learned something from that period. I normally don't comment on character's actions as the react in what ever way the writer dictates but I offer these suggestions with respect. Please keep the story going. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

I hope that we will be informed about the outcome of the month in the house.

More please!

I was fascinated by the story, but I am frustrated at not knowing the outcome of their month together.

Love this series why you never finished it it beyond me

They have the most bipolar relationship