All Comments on 'The Ex Factor'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nice....

but could have gone so much further...Honestly, the whole thing seemed a little rushed...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good Start

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
a turn-on

Well told and believable. Too much foul language; both girls talk like guys and it don't improve the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Ugh

Puleeese... this was crap wtih a capital C.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
They talk like guys?

Since when were men the only people allowed to swear? What the hell..?

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