by Vinny Smith
A great bag of surprises. Loved the twist at the end. Gavin really got himself into quite a hairy situation. lol!
You set the tone of the story from the very first sentence, and I loved the stylistic way in which it was presented. I laughed several times at the clever set of circumstances you devised. Fun! Fun! Fun!
Great story, especially the twisted ending. But why was it necessary for the Tina character to be a lesbian?
the twist and turns are delightful. Thanks.