by Vinny Smith
the twist and turns are delightful. Thanks.
Great story, especially the twisted ending. But why was it necessary for the Tina character to be a lesbian?
You set the tone of the story from the very first sentence, and I loved the stylistic way in which it was presented. I laughed several times at the clever set of circumstances you devised. Fun! Fun! Fun!
A great bag of surprises. Loved the twist at the end. Gavin really got himself into quite a hairy situation. lol!