All Comments on 'The Power Ch. 02'

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DanielOrmeDanielOrmealmost 16 years ago
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Two of my favorite things in an erotic story: Mind control and Christina Aguilera.

cryforhelpcryforhelpalmost 16 years ago
Poorer spelling, better setting

I like the celebrity angle, keep it up!

But please check your spelling and writing as thoroughly as for chapter 1, the errors are distracting. As regards content: Personally I always liked Angelina Jolie's wild and kinky streak ;).

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