All Comments on 'The Sales Associate Ch. 01-02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good start

Good start, hope it runs to a few more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I agree.

And I also wouldn't mind seeing more of the Cori story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow...

I like the way you made the story very sexual without putting much actual sexual acts in. I also like the way you put words together. Very nice read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I like it very much.

Excelent!!!

I like it very much.

It´s as good as "The hard body shop clerk"

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Holly must be Cori’s cousin. She is just as hot and just as seemingly unconscious of the effect her body has on men, but of course she knows. A great story.

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.

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