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by MzSapphiria
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MzMagicBeautyalmost 12 years ago.....
Im starting to love this story but the chapter are wayy to short
jazz1190almost 12 years agoGreat Start
Wow great start!! I hope you make him realize soon that he is in love with Trystynne. I cant wait to read the next chapter!!!
Madameblaquealmost 12 years agoExcellent start. Now I'm wondering if he's a vampire. I'd love to read more.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoyour in desperate need of an editor...it's not flowing right which is sad as it has potential
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI like it
Really like where this is going! Cant wait for more and maybe the chapters can be a bit longer???? ;-)
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