by MzSapphiria
Really like where this is going! Cant wait for more and maybe the chapters can be a bit longer???? ;-)
your in desperate need of an editor...it's not flowing right which is sad as it has potential
Excellent start. Now I'm wondering if he's a vampire. I'd love to read more.
Wow great start!! I hope you make him realize soon that he is in love with Trystynne. I cant wait to read the next chapter!!!
Im starting to love this story but the chapter are wayy to short