All Comments on 'Vacation with Peggy Day 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
What

A complete pile of dog shit, this is awful. Who told you that you could write? This is like H.S. shit. Grow up and get a life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Your quite right I didn't like this shit.

You sir are a pig. You have no idea how to treat a woman. If you have a woman of your own outside of this sick fantasy then I pity her. And this story is BDSM notihnig more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
only one way to sum this up

CRAP and badly written CRAP at that

dsouldsoulover 12 years ago
Substance but No Content

The second story has got substance. It's a fun-filled story, but needs a strong sense of content in it. I would have loved to see more action put into the sex scenes. Still a lovely frolicsome story.

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