All Comments on 'Who's The Boss? Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Getting better and

more intriguing with each new chapter. Excellent story as well as writing. Looking very much forward to the next installment.

squangosquangoabout 15 years ago
enjoyed this chapter

Leaving her come covered and alone in the men's bathroom certainly made a point. I bet she would have looked very sexy sitting there. This chapter was the best yet. Good job.

MissSensesMissSensesover 13 years ago
Yummy!

Parking garages, elevators and resturants... oh my! Very hot read! Just getting better and better. Thank you for sharing. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
what a turn off

There's nothing less sexy than a public lavatory, especially a men's room. Yuuch! The obnoxious smell alone is enough to make one want to get the fuck out of there immediately. This is your character's idea of something erotic? What a dork.

Emily, Chicago

ChatVilleChatVillealmost 5 years ago
please teach me

Please, Sir, please teach me to be a perfect little slut for you."

So interesting !

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