All Comments on 'Wife Gets Caught'

Buster2u. One of the greatest comments I have ever read. You give hope! :)

The author did an excellent job.

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It is so sad that some of the best writers have left the site because of the unthankful, selfish cruelty of many commentators.

Wife screws another man it's divorce time

May should have been mad that Gary watched the whole episode and didn't try to stop it. Typical cuck reaction to watch and get aroused.

May's explanation of why she didn't renege on the agreement didn't hold water. She didn't want to. She only regretted if after she found she didn't enjoy it as much as her delusional thinking led her to believe she would.

Why didn't Gary tell May the rumors he heard about Ralph and Crystal being part of the key club? He apparently knew a lot about it.

Femdom agitprop. What a cuck!

She felt she had to live up to the deal. What a crock!

Quit writing cuckold garbage, and all you idiot writers singing the praise of the lifestyle just some hard facts, swinging destroys 80% of the marriages of people who try it. That's right 4 out of 5 marriages do NOT survive sharing, swinging or swapping!

If sex with Ralph was so disgusting and painful for May, then why were there those passionate and tender kisses at the door before he left?

Brother why are you like this?, Don't you feel any shame?

Whata load of bullocks...as for thst "koke contract he and the wife made up ..all it was was a thinly veiled " I still remember and will never forget!".

Are there any NON CUCK writers at LITEROTICA? R.H.

This concept of having to keep a promise made while single ranks right up there with some of the ridiculous blackmail stories we read on this site.

Last I checked the promises made while taking your wedding vows supercede and promises made while single.

Even though he made her realize how ridiculous she sounded when she was attempting to explain it's a bit inconceivable that he didn't just completely slam the door on her explanation.

Regardless of the pain Ralph caused her or the fact that some of the things he did were truly non consensual .... The fact is she entered into the whole situation voluntarily and then his it from her husband. There's no way things are better than ever a week later.

3 stars and that was generous. I would have divorced her, Honoring a stupid drunken promise after marriage is a no no, she could do what she wants as a single person and could try to escape the being caught & guilt of doing it while engaged. If i were young and not married, might have tried to go on,. but after several yrs of marriage, after the plotting and planning SHE put into honoring(as if this twat has any idea of what honor is about) this college promise, is beyong forgiveness much less forgetting. That she took special lingerie to wear, that she was excited and looking forward to "making love" w/ a better endowed male and that the male was supposedly a fried of hubby, she couldnt have fucked her marriage any worse, i dont think. Hard to beleive shes a college grajuate, but w/ all the scum, snowflakes and safe space needing illiberal grads coming from hier edumacation indoctrination centers, it actually makes sense. The idiots coming from hier ed since sometime in the 90s have had the moral, ethical, critical thinking and ability to argue both sides of an issue have been dumbed out of them w/ prolly no resistance, since they come to hier ed w/ almost no education or intelligence training from hi scrool. She can spell honor but has no idea of what it means, she'd have a brain meltdown or it would vapor lock if you asked her what was more honorable; keeping a drunken promise to a college stud, while betraying your hubby's trust or honoring the marriage vows you made to your husband in front of a church crowd? Shallow and stupid barely describe her and her character qualities are nonexistant; 1- cheats, 2- w/ hubbys friend, 3- wants it, 4-plans for it to be special, this cheating, by using rarely seen lingerie, setting up a clean location, 5- cleaning said location of all evidence b4 lover is out de do' (wonder what lie she wld have come up w/ to excuse 1- never wearing that set of lingerie again or 2- explaining how the panties were ruined, if she were stupid enuf to keep the top). I'd regret divorcing her but if shes that stupid, feckless and faithless, i'd not want to waste more time on her. As i said if not married keep the slut as a FwB but make her ask why no marriage proposal ever came. Not very impressed w/ MC's reasoning or kindness or delusions about how he and the slut grew from the episode. The friends would never be friends again, especially after i put an ambush hurting on the smirky stud( i have a lot of anger and hate issues that wld have made the hurting baaaad). rk

The story's based on a stupid-assed promise that's kept as serious even though his wife was drunk. The other couple agreed that she should live with the promise, but the wife wouldn't tell her husband as he wouldn't understand. No shit!! But he never asked about the promise she made marrying him, which should superscede any other promise made. Never asked why she didn't refuse the promise or ask her WHY she felt she had to honor it. For her to be with her husband as tho nothing happened at all is ludicrous. 2 stars Bob

Unbelievable negative comments on a Must Read Story.

How can people so misinterpret suck a clever story?

What a fucked up shit story, sorry he did not BTB (her) and cut the bull to piesces.

jopstorm1945

Every negative comment xtimes TWO.

If I had ever written this drivel, I would retract it immediately and burn all traces of it (like a bad video tape).

Or I would simply kill myself from embarrassment, shame and humiliation.

Or do both. Requiem pace.

"""""“Honey, I… well I guess we’ve kind of come down hard on Ralph. Not that he doesn’t deserve it. And pretty much tossed out their ridiculous key club, but there is another aspect here that I hate to mention. But think I have to.}}}}}} " Honey I GUESS??? Who in their right mind would even begin to consider that?? He sure started to sound like a CUCKOLD there. Still a 5* for the effort.

So, this brain dead cunt thinks she owes this asshole a free night of fucking for some bullshit note she wrote in college at a drunken party. HUH. I think hubby needs to give her some walking papers. He should have pulled out the Louisville slugger and worked Ralph over very thoroughly, especially between the legs.

Sorry, I don’t get the point and I don’t usually miss much.

interesting but only a stupid woman would do what she did. She could have fucked him on her super safe day's way back in college. Randy still needs an anonymous "mugging" some night. Crystal too.

Quelle merde, je regrette d'avoir lu cela. Mauviette.

a story of dumb slut wife and stupid husband with no brain attached

I never understand these stories where the husband sees what's going on and doesn't immediately take some sort of action. Then to even consider reconnecting with his "best friend" sometime in the future is unbelievable. Also the wife's story is nonsense. I think she should have lost the baby and be divorced by her husband.

The husband was a cuckold wimp. The wife used that promissory note as an excuse to cheat on her husband, doing special things for her lover that she didn't do for her husband.

this is complete bullshit, the husband is a wimp, no husband in the world continues watching his wife getting fucked and acting as if nothing happened then he says that they were hard on Ralf??? what a wimp

he should have kicked his ass and thrown him out, and his wife is a cheater, she risked the life of her baby, so what would happen if she got STD, then she should abort the baby, so what kind of mother she is

this husband is a wimp and she has full right to cheat on him

Trama y premisa de mierda.

No es para mí...

I have given up on "Loving Wives"

It used to be a fun place where FICTIONAL (that means NOT TRUE) stories about fantasy sex was written about.

It has become a bunch of stories where instead of fun sex, marriages are ruined and people are injured.

Again, IT IS FANTASY

You people need to get over yourselves.

She still cheated.

Better than I expected, he's more man than me though, I would have kicked them all out.....whatever debt she was honoring, broke the vows she made to her husband. Sure she hated the encounter, regretted it after, but what if the other guy had lived up to his reputation? She has spent all that time since before she was married wanting this guy for a go and she took it!!! Like I said strong man for taking her right back.

I actually hate this story, like no one is at fault or should be punished. In real life, it would live to regret taking her back until the day he didn’t. Honestly, I cannot imagine myself ever getting over this and forgiving her. Ever.

Great story - very well written and erotic. Have to suspend belief several times but we’ll setup and good flow

Quite an old story (VCRs?) lots of cliches, no unexpected plot twist and cardboard cut-out characters. Quite a lot of 'beyond belief' required to get through it all. Well written though

she's a cheating bitch. I wonder whose kid she is having ...

What a despicable story. May is a cheating slut and her husband is a willing cuck. The kid's probably not his.

An oldie but baddie. What husband sits there doing nothing for 3 hours while his wife gets fucked in every hole by some guy who is allegedly one of his best friends? And then nothing with the wife other than a few very mild recriminations and immediately all is well? 1*

So many inconsistencies in this story. She tells her husband she was looking forward to the event. She tells her husband that she decided to enjoy the whole thing. She tells her husband that she wanted to give Ralph a good time. The video shows her deep throating his cock and swallowing his load then him telling it was the best lost ever. It shows her enjoying the oral sex. Etc. And in the meeting with Crystal and Ralph she admits to doing things for Ralph that she had never done for her husband. Then in the same meeting she claims to have only been going through the motions and did not enjoy it. She claims the anal sex was rape but the video shows her fucking her ass on his cock. Seems like two different stories. Which did you mean ?

Holy fucking Christ this is the worst. What a ridiculous reason for cheating. Absolutely incomprehensible. Then she can’t keep her story straight. And the comment about “past her cervix”??? Of a pregnant woman??? Dude, you’re better than this.

Yep! Come on over that drunken contract we wrote 6 years ago supersedes my marriage vows and I am loyal and keeping my word just NOT to my husband… duh!

Dumb dumb dumb. Sorry just too damned dumb.

Two stars for a read that was painful, even with wholesale skimming. I was tempted to go one star, but for some reason settled in two. Dislike the story.) Basically, a wasted half hour, even with the skimming.

JPB

May still is a cheater and Gary should have beat Ralph's behind. He raped May's ass and her husband did another, Coward!

I can see why this story has a lower rating than some of the author's other stories. Some parts of it were good and some parts were pure rubbish. I can't imagine remaining friends with Crystal and Ralph after the crap they pulled, especially Ralph. He needed to get his ass whipped and kicked in the nuts a couple of times. Seems like Gary was a considerate Chuck by not divorcing his pregnant wife, but how could he ever trust her again. He just took it on the chin but there would always be that nagging doubt in the back of his mind.

Painful to read followed by conclusion that insulted any sane reader.

Unfinished business. Take Ralph to court for rape!

Fantasy as always. Was not a good read or well written. Something is missing. Gary should get the DNA of the child checked. Also the STDs.

Very disappointing. Surprised that May got away with screwing Ralph. Surprised that there was no divorce. Surprised that there was no punishment for both Ralph and Crystal. Should have taken a baseball bat to Ralph while he was screwing May. Can’t believe he accepted May’s explanation of the IOU. Should have taken a bat to May for that stupid explanation. No self respecting husband would have watched them having sex like it was a movie. Why didn’t he get popcorn while he was watching?

Great story although it seems unfair that the swingers basically got away with pushing May into something that never should have occurred. However Life is not always a straight follower of the rules so it does happen. It's a good thing that hubby & wife found their way back to the love they had beforehand & triumphed in the end.

Terrible, unreal, totally unbelievable, infantile story. Had to be written by a woman or a fag.

Who the hell would feel honor bound to a 6-yr-old promised fuck especially when married to another? That is pure insanity and complete horseshit! FO with that crap.

Anyone like that not only deserves divorce but really deserves to be terminated.

Said before but bears repeating:any and all promises of this kind become null and void upon saying your marriage vows.Why this viewpoint wasnt presented in this story is puzzling,and,ultimately,undermines the premise.In spite of being well written it simply lacks the payoff a cheating wife story should give the reader.

Read for 2nd time. That she did it because she gave her word was ridiculous, what about giving her word to her husband on her wedding day. Ditch her and a dna check on the baby for sure.

How can a man sit down with his wife and two so called friends, have this inane conversation and then go on with his marriage...Like pass me the salt. Construction was poor. Reaction was lame and the husband was pathetic. nothing redeeming here.

Very disappointing from an author I previously enjoyed.

The rape was too much. To make it worse, with video evidence, it was was not reported to the police.

Essentially they were turning a raping monster loose to severely damage other women.

The author should remove this disgusting story from the internet.

Not a Member For A Reason !

This story is a prime exhibit!

the story started well but turned to shit from the middle till the end

the husband is a wimp, he watched his wife being fucked and raped and did not do anything at all

any ma should immediately put a stop to all of this and kick her lover and her out immediately

the wife is a lier and cheater, she keeps telling her husband that her night of sex with her lover was not important and she did it only to honor her promise, so what about her vows when she got married, why she did not honor them,

she dressed for her lover

she seduced her lover with her sexy voice (come fuck me voice)

he deep throat her lover, swallows, and shows that she loves every drop

she allowed him to rape her ass ( she could push him away if she wanted that )

and for the husband

any real man should beat the lover and kick him out of the house

he was very gentle with them and even after they left he told his wife that he felt sad because he was hard on the lover??? what kind of wimp this man is

he did not kick his wife out

he did not do a DNA test to be sure that he is the father (her words mean nothing, she is a lier and a cheater and can not be treated)

the story is illogic

Near the top of any worst of all time story discussions. I can be tough on writing that has zero plausibility. Where characters say and do things that just make no sense. It makes me wonder how many people sit down and write something like this particular piece of trash and say, well I’m going to do the opposite of everything that seems logical because it will be unconventional and more interesting which does not work that way. The other possibility is that some of the writers really don’t have a clue or common sense. Not a drop. That’s the scary possible explanation. Apparently this writer thinks a monster who rapes is very sexy! Yeah, no.its just fucked up like I’m guessing many of your ideas are. It’s kind of difficult to disgust me when reading stories here. A story can be bad or the writer inept but there aren’t too many that check off every single box for terrible beyond words. I showed the story to my husband and he said is this a joke or did this writer just purposely put every bad idea you could think of in one sad little attempt to write a story? If this is an example of a puss oozing abscess kind of a story you plan on writing I’d brace yourself for some real honest to God vitriol. What I just said will be one of the nicer comments.

Gary is unbelievable.

His wife is a cheat.

Maybe they deserve each other.