All Comments on 'Will I Learn To Love? Ch. 04'

This is a very pleasant story, but to me, it seemed in the first half-page or so that both of the characters had some sort of personality transplant between Ch.#3 and Ch.#4; it smoothed out toward the end, but at first reading, it didn't seem to make much sense. That said, I'm still looking forward to the completion of the story.

-- KK in Texas

I could swear this story is on here or someting very very simlar. Please let me know if im mistaken.