All Comments on 'Twighlight in the Tundra'

fierce and infused with stony resoluteness. I've been there and your poem really works for me. Thank you for posting it. :-)

......to find such an accomplished new poet. The enjambment in verse 2 is very effective. These lines.....

"There is nothing

but the stark stony silence

of a land resisting definition, ownership."

...hiss with intesity. Very nice.

You pricked your lovely fingers

on my poisoned barbs, and

frightened,

you fled

you jumped

you ran away,

bounding

like a wounded,

hunted

doe.

(this for some reason won't template the same as you have written it)

This actually gave me a visual image of something jumping and bounding away.

final lines really smack home.

Thank you so much - who knew I could find an outlet for my poetry here. So many poems that were destined forever to be kept in a dark drawer - thanks for bringing them out into the light with your appreciation.