All Comments on '1982 Part 01 - Emily'

thanks for sharing. loved

Can't wait to see where this goes. :)

That was amazing! Every sentence. Every word. I love Emily! She's a good woman.

I am intrigued

Great story. Beautifully told.

Just one small "thing".

Every paragraph practically starts "Emily..." or "David...". Or "As she" or "As he".

Maybe think of being creative with your sentences? Rather than repetitive?