All Comments on '1982 Part 01 - Emily'

Great story. Beautifully told.

Just one small "thing".

Every paragraph practically starts "Emily..." or "David...". Or "As she" or "As he".

Maybe think of being creative with your sentences? Rather than repetitive?

I am intrigued

That was amazing! Every sentence. Every word. I love Emily! She's a good woman.

Can't wait to see where this goes. :)

thanks for sharing. loved