All Comments on '24 hour YouTube Challenge Pt. 03'

Absolutely loved this. Hope that trip of hers into the US will appear in a sequal!

Love it, great story 👍

What a great story! I wish more people would write such original stories!

Nice way to close, 5 stars from me

Absolutely perfect

This is such a good story! I've read a lot of stories about white girls seduced by Black men, and this might be my all-time favourite.

The very end feels a bit abrupt, though, and I kind of wish we'd gotten to know a bit more about the brothers' exploits. Like, just how their followers seem to know they fuck all these women but Elli didn't see anything when she was researching.

I don't care if Eli continues to be a YouTuber or not, all I want, all we want, is for us to see through all the nuanced details you'll come up with for Eli's further descent into deprevity, I should say ascent tbh, this is a beautiful young woman discovering the most pleasent things in life, bbc.

Do all the kinks imaginable through her journey with bbc. I have faith in you.

need more. perfect story so far

You go girl. A champion is born. Elli, I love you. You will remain in my imagination’s memory for a long, long time. A warm glow to be relished.

Kudos Firsttimewriting. Kudos.