All Comments on '750-08 John and Macy'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

"Dépêchez-vous," Now who would use the formal ‘vous’ form of speech between lovers?

Mixing present tense in with past tense still. Ach!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Nope, sounds forced, like they had to have others impacting their relationship for them to proceed. That at romance witht those undertones to the relationhip. Destined to fail, they will be bored very soon. FAILED!!!!!

DuleighDuleigh3 months agoAuthor

Poor anonymous critics

John and Macy have been married 10 years, and are madly in love with each other.

Your criticism is appreciated but it's a failure

Campus77Campus773 months ago

Oh shit...The anonymous freaks are back again. I know this couple and all their family. There is nothing forced about this. I can see another chapter of the John and Macy and family. Can hardly wait for Macy and Andi to have a child. What a rush for so many folks!

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbum3 months ago

You have a wide stable of horny women ready to satisfy their mates. Macy, Andi and Lucy

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