All Comments on 'A Beach Walk'

Loved the concept , flesh it out more, develop the characters. Erotic though makes me want more!

I liked but was lost when you stopped the story. Show a bit more like you two went into the water to feel the togetherness and be one of the waves. anything that would make me want to read more.

I love it! Does a great job at leaving you wanting more. One of my favorite stories on this site tbh, great work.