All Comments on 'A Couple's Invitation Pt. 01'

Yes! Keep writing and sharing the experience. Great start to a wonderful series!

exploring their desires. Good writing

Yes keep going with it maybe with just Alec and Gray

a few typos but super hot story

Great beginning, please continue.

What can I say? It is very hot and can fantasize me being the barista. This is a 2 orgasm story!

Yes, please continue, these three sexy lovers are more than worthy of another tryst! Your third story here on Lit is also your third ***** hit. Well done.

This was hot. Really excited for the continuation.

Ahh! Sorry about the couple typos. I get too turned on when editing the things I write and lose focus. I’ll fix them haha.

Yes. Please keep going. Alec sounds like a great kind guy.

Inspiring

Really liked the focus on nipple play (which is unfortunately seems rare) and the slow build. I could definitely see myself enjoying that scenario.