All Comments on 'A Couple's Invitation Pt. 01'

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60andsensual60andsensual10 months ago

Really liked the focus on nipple play (which is unfortunately seems rare) and the slow build. I could definitely see myself enjoying that scenario.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Inspiring

Exluke1Exluke1over 1 year ago

Yes. Please keep going. Alec sounds like a great kind guy.

linenmorninglinenmorningover 1 year agoAuthor

Ahh! Sorry about the couple typos. I get too turned on when editing the things I write and lose focus. I’ll fix them haha.

HiddenSecret00HiddenSecret00over 1 year ago

This was hot. Really excited for the continuation.

MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFerover 1 year ago

Yes, please continue, these three sexy lovers are more than worthy of another tryst! Your third story here on Lit is also your third ***** hit. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What can I say? It is very hot and can fantasize me being the barista. This is a 2 orgasm story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great beginning, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

a few typos but super hot story

john22307john22307over 1 year ago

Yes keep going with it maybe with just Alec and Gray

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

exploring their desires. Good writing

Rj_GallosRj_Gallosover 1 year ago

Yes! Keep writing and sharing the experience. Great start to a wonderful series!

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