All Comments on 'A Cure for Boredomme Ch. 02 - A New Day'

by hypnosissir

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TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFakeover 2 years ago

I love your stories, they are well written with compelling plots and sexy writing, but there's something missing, which is a real battle between the protagonist and antagonist. They hypno leaders have no challengers. Such as your story where the guy could control people through touch, them the evil mind controller was unbeatable. Adding a chance to resist would be nice.

krnrobeykrnrobeyover 2 years ago

I really like how this is going. I'd be very excited if Hannah slowly compels Emily to do progressively more embarrassing, and ultimately degrading things...

egb3rtegb3rtover 2 years ago

More please. Either to this series or another. I love the hypnotic deception that takes place.

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