All Comments on 'A Day in The Sun'

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Welcome back, Santee! I hope this great story is the beginning of a resurgence of your sharing your talent with us. I've often wondered about the spouses of economists. It's such a depressing, imprecise, and yet amazingly important subject. Now I know what goes on behind the scenes and even openly at the poolside. I half hoped that Sharon and hubby, Alex and spouse, might run into each other at one of the economist-approved eateries on the island. Sharon now with her tan-without-lines and Alex' French wife looking pasty white. Would Sharon nevertheless be intimated by Alex' French wife? The French can be so beautiful, after all; and even if they are not, they act as though they are which can be, and usually is, convincing. Maybe not economists, though. 5* and again, welcome back! ~~JB Edwards

She taught her granddaughters it's ok to cheat with justification

'And I was certainly guilty of cheating on my husband. One must face the responsibility and consequences of one's actions, both good and bad.' Damn hypocrite, she never faced any consequences. And it never weighed on her conscience. So its a pretty bad advice to tell their granddaughers that its alright to cheat if you were never honest enough to actually face any consequences.

It was a good story. 5*

What a bitch and no role model! She gave her husband sloppy seconds all week and it's all ok because he didn't find out.

Oh look, another cream pie connoisseur has returned to embarrass itself....

Prefer my cheating caught and punished, if you had finished in line with her fond afterthoughts, maybe you would’ve gotten a higher vote.

She did the right thing in keeping her secret. However, her lack of remorse is very revealing of her broader character. Seems hard to believe she loved her husband, as opposed to held him in affection.

Another boilerplate version of a worn out theme. Glad I only skimmed.

one of the best stories I've read on this site.

Epilogue: Cheating skank slut Sharon's advice to her granddaughters took root. Later both married and both cheated on their husbands. However, unlike piece of shit Sharon they were caught red handed and their husbands both kicked their whore asses to the curb. They ended up moving in with granny Sharon and pretending to take care of her. However, her lessons on who to be selfish and entitled, were well learned as they found a way to steal all of her money. They then put her in a state run dump extended care facility where she died all alone. In the end, she got what she deserved.

What she did is steal from her husband and their grandpa the opportunity to live a life free of a morally bankrupt skank wife. I mean if that's what she wanted, then do it, she's a individual with free will, but tell the man you supposedly love, otherwise you're lying to yourself and him. Just being selfish for no real reason than base desires. He probably always would know that something was wrong but couldn't put his finger on it, we men have a 6th sense that way sometimes.

Horrible! She never ever should have said anything! Poor guy is dead and now his grandkids know how he was taken advantage of!

It would have been great if the girls, or least one of them, shouted "SLUT" and said I hope you rot in hell and spit at her. Then if the old lady needs help dump her in a old folks home alone and leave her in her own loneliness.

10 Stars to the writer, for writing a great Story, Great work, Great Effort, Happy Ending! LOL, it is all there for the Grandkids listening to Grandma! Thank You for your effort. I know how hard it is to do. Buster2U

A bunch of little sick fuckers for not liking this story. Who was hurt? Bill wasn't. And the granddaughters learned a good lesson about life and reality

Story of an 80 year old slut telling her granddaughters how much she disrespected her husband. Simply ridiculous.

Brilliant and honest. There will be the rantings and raving here in the comments of the vindictive misogynists. Just ignore them as you have written a believable and relatable tale that ends well for everyone. One criticism though, do not start a sentence with a conjuction (and, so,but etc.). These words are used to join two phrases which would, on their own, be separate sentences into one. A common mistake also is to use a command before the conjuction. This seems to be a particularly American mistake and is even promoted by grammarly (an American program) perpetuating this common mistake. Very well done.

Damned bitch making sure her cheating traits are passed to her granddaughters.

Liked it for it's realism. The cunt was so proud of her cheating. You can only hope her husband was screwing every coed he could get his hands on and dick in.

Femdom agitprop outlives us all...

The main character is a wholly unlikeable person. There's a reason Dante created the 9th Circle of the Inferno for those guilty of Treachery: liars, betrayers, and deceivers. Every other evil begins with treachery.

So the moral of this story is its fine to cuck the man you apparently love and more importantly the old bitch tells her grandchildren to go out and fuck around on thier partners and its fine if the cuck never finds out. Go story to show young women about to get married or in relationships.

I often travel with my husband to his conferences at exotic locations, and I frequently find a fuck buddy for several days. My husband suspects I fuck strangers, but he has no desire for intimacy so all is good. I have observed numerous times that my actions mirror those of other wives. Good effort on your story.

America the land of the braves and the sluts, or what was it again?

Great story and everyone I know knows people who on vacation with their hubby or even full family and hooks up with another . The very long ago spring breaks had that happen, friends camping trips are crazy and last year a close friend traveled to a Caribbean island for a company trip for four days two and a half business. His department ended early every day and he became friendly the first day with a coworker wife. They are married for 30 years and she claimed to have never cheated but he said that first day he fucked her ass mouth and pussy like she was a paid hooker. The third night into last day her husband did an overnight deep sea fishing for almost 24 hours with clients. He said she was in his room fucking all night . He said her body was perfect for fucking and after days of rough stuff that morning watching the sun rise over the ocean laying flat on her stomach he slowly made love to her and she said she never was fucked like that ever . It was amazing he said they showered as she blew him and he slow fucked her pusdy again then ass as he held her up and looked into her eyes and kissed slowly cumming up her ass . . She is totally hooked on him and they still meet to fuck . She claims to totally love her husband and would never want to hurt him but her can’t fuck her the way he does and never has and it isn’t about size because they are similar. He said the husband is a great guy but he tells great and a bit smug knowing as they talk especially when she is with him that she loves his cock more and satisfied her more in bed . . Two other galas since then had her sneak away and shoot loads for her to swallow and told her she had to kiss hubby before she took a sip of drink. The first one he laughed she snuck a sip of her drink the second time she kissed him with remnants of his load in her mouth. Her sister is the only person that knows and is not happy with her but she just can’t get enough of fucking him and they think they are very discreet but a lot get caught who think the same

Would of been nicer had he found out the truth that his marriage was a lie, that the person to whom he was married was nothing but a backstabbing whore.

Not only did she betray her husband but, in effect, she is teaching future generations that you can easily get away with it so no point denying what you believe you deserve.

I thought it was awful.

Well written from the perspective of a faithless slut, poor guy.

Well written story about a cold, cruel woman. I can only feel pity for any man married to such a cast iron bitch.

Need to mention the technology which slurped the ejaculate every afternoon. Alex has no standing to complain about sloppy seconds.

This may be just a story, but the true story is she is not a good partner.

See, you're a cuck author that wrote a story that, in a way, romanticises cheating on your partner, which considering your username it really isn't surprising, thus further developing the indian stereotype as cuckolded rapists that shit in the street with repulsive cooking methods giving them near constant diarrhea. One could go on with the stereotype adding extreme xenophobia, extreme poverty, cast system and so on, but that is irrelevant to the story.

The issue with the story is that you are turning the betrayal of a spouse as something exciting when in reality it destroys families once the truth comes out.

We are responsible for what we put out there, as you are responsible for your story, and because of this revolting story your pain and suffering will be justified, or rather they will bring joy to others.

It's not karma, but it's the closest thing to it.

I enjoyed the story and wonder why there is so much negative commentary here of all places.

"Spousal infidelity is the leading cause of divorce." I beg to differ....the leading cause of divorce the world over....is marriage.

Yay. A one-time slut educating her granddaughters on being a slut. Wsy to make a great impression, Grandma!