All Comments on 'A Discovery in the Wardrobe Pt. 02'

by Bakerdan1975

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swfb70swfb708 months ago

I look forward to the next couple of chapters

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Like the slow build up. Makes it seem more real. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Tom599Tom5993 months ago

Great read love more wish she was my sister

Bisexual_4_all_pleasuresBisexual_4_all_pleasures3 months ago

This was great, A much better read than the first chapter, you could sense the tension and feeling the brother had from your explanation, well done, please write more soon.

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