All Comments on 'A Dream Vacation Ch. 03'

I'm not a fan of stories that make out the male to be mentally retarded, the way he is presented here. Someone so weak and devoid of any gumption that he is easily manipulated by his wife plus anyone else he encounters.

I thought chapter CH 1 was erotic and could be viewed as realistic. But thereafter, your story has become pure fantasy (and not fantasies I share). Good luck to you. I'll go elsewhere for my reading pleasure.

Harsh comments from others. I really liked the series! Please write some more.